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AGE:
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LOC: Northridge, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 26
LOC: Northridge, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 26
Writing has been my life since I remember. I’ve come a long way from writing people poetry on any subject they desire in coffee houses and such. I would like to get some of my work published for I feel that would be the greatest reward as a writer. A big thanks to all who review my work…I’ll try and do the same for everyone!
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Oh this mystery of mysteries. There will never be such a thing quite so chaotic as love. The greatest happiness and the greatest pain. Those that do not have love, envy it. They vie to catch it and make it their own. They try and destroy all loves. Wolves, predators seeking their preys. How does one survive love? The utter brutal pain, the perfect feelings of Ecstasy. What beauty lies within this never ending spinning combustion! How can one not fight for love? Give me my arms! I shall raise ...
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Breathe. You gasp for breath as you come up for air. The bathtub full of crimson. Every pain you ever felt is weakend at this moment. This great misery, the great triumph. At last you have control over your life. Even your death, finally you have power. The pain returns to numbness. Shivering, feverish you start to remember what brought you here. The rape, the anguish, the pain others brought you. Their undying lack of understanding. "Still think this is a phase mom?!" You'll prove to them th...
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Puzzlement Riddles Enigma. Puzzlement Riddles Enigma. Puzzlement Riddles Enigma. Enigma Puzzlement Riddles. Enigma Puzzlement Riddles. Enigma Puzzlement Riddles. Riddles Enigma Puzzlement. Riddles Enigma Puzzlement. Riddles Enigma Puzzlement. Manners ladies and gentlemen. Lest us not forget them. Do not step on anyone's toes. Be sheep among men! The puzzling feature of the amassing mob. Amuzes me to a heart felt throb. They seem to be on the knob! Ha! Ha! Crudeness and rudeness. Abuse others ...
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Welcome to the tip of the world. Let us venture even higher the life we created for ourselves. Running fruitfully into our own disasters. I gleefully just experienced love and it remains in me. I never let go of those I've loved. Always there will be heartbreak, always the inevitable pain. Even in this madness, I feel more tranquil then I have in a long time. I know love exists, I know now as a positive fact! There's great revelry for me in that. To know that dreams come true, but sometime we...
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The pressure is building and I do not know what to do! One way leads to safety and misery. The other to chaos and love. These feelings fester inside of me. My stomach wrenches and I double over. What am I going to do? Love hurts, but is it supposed to be agonizing? I must fight, i can not let my emotions control me. Every time she speaks to me I lose control. I can't control these emotions! I've had control up to now. Worked and worked on the control! Gone! Gone is sensibility! I love the fee...
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You can spell schizophrenia! Funny very funny. Not to mention how much it really hits home. Everyone is crazy nowadays. They give kids ritalin in a pez dispenser now. Not only can they focus, but they get a cool little spiderman head. The funny thing is I've been diagnosed like 3 different times at least. Everytime a different outcome. Prozac parades and the like. Keep it up, I'd love to hear you do the routine one day.
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I hope you found him. I like where you are going with this. Kind of need to see the rest of the piece, however.I think you were trying a little to hard to make the reader feel as your charachter would feel. Anxious and alone, but I just have seen that style so many times it didn't give me anything, but an it figures. Here's why... I want to know why you chase him. Love is not just a reason, you need more. What burns your soul for him. What makes steam rise out of your head, what makes you the...
We have a conflaguration going on here ;) Very well writte metaphor. I given only as much clue as i'm going to for the subject of the metaphor. I liked it a lot, it moved me in. The description's were as mesmerizing as the subject. I am entranced and enthralled write more.
Well written. I found it an excellent piece on our memories. You have a good writing style. I like how you break free of commonality writing. I like to seebroken sentence structures in poems. The more rules broken in your poetic writing style, the more you are simply a poet. Good imagery and thank you for that feeling of desert land. I like being able to feel what I read. Good job.
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