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AGE: 34
LOC: Atlanta, GA
GEN: Female
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Poetry / FEARful LOVE
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FEARful LOVE I want to love you LOVE…I really do I’ve heard so many good things about you I heard from GLOOM and SO-BLUE they raved about the power you exude, the wonder of you… How you made them smile just by being you I heard it from TRUTH’s girl that you knocked HATE out in front of the WORLD And everybody say he’s like Debo around their way Well, that is what they say I am so impressed how you uniquely bless How you hooked up HOPE with BROKEN-HEART How that gave him a brand new start And ...
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Haiku/Senryu / Your Smile
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Your Smile Like a rose mid-bloom I’m drawn to your sunlit smile and open my heart
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Haiku/Senryu / Lacklover
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Lacklover His love lacks passion Like the willow I weep; in the eyes of my soul
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Poetry / The Visit
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THE VISIT He was all she had… her smile, her treasured gift, her joy and pride And they want me to visit her home and tell her that he died They want me to verbally suffocate her spirit and shatter her motherly heart They want me to report of his untimely demise and tear her world eternally apart To rob her and rape her of her joy for the rest of her days In telling her that her favorite child, her youngest son, – died viciously – on his 20th birthday
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IN-LOVE'S DEPARTURE Today, I in-loved someone who didn’t in-love me back… For years, I’d read him and became fluent in Love-Braille But at this moment, with clay-smeared eyes, I washed in the pool of Siloam And I saw it today – As reality meteors rained and crashed from the sky around me My matrixal globe cracked down the center of my rupturing heart This world of in-love had finally succumb to the elements of his deceitful eyes and the fragrant stench of his selfish lustful soul I will alway...
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Very expressive piece - nice metaphor usage. Nice scribe. Loved this line ==> "Beware! Be scared of me! I’m a glittering brand-new hypocrite!"
Poetry / THE BATHTUB
Hot and steamy! I love it...great visuals and flow. Great write.
Clear, precise and very true. Hey, you never know! Nice capture.
Yep, that just about sums up my life as well. I really like this one. Very nice choice of words.
Six-word memoirs huh? Very creative. Cool idea. I think you did a good job with this one. I had to read the details first before I understood the concept. You've inspired me to write a few. Thanks for sharing.
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