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LOC: Charlotte, NC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 27
LOC: Charlotte, NC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 27
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Urban atrocity and immoral victories Values hold no authority when deliberating against thieves Illusions of what's important and what it is to be or not to be, free The farther we go the further apart we grow To be a seed from his tree is to know the will of him But now the apple has fallen as the branch rips from the stem Legal biz, legal sorcery placing foes at bay Words casting magical spells to keep the crooked from being put away Who said magic wasn't real? If we know its an illusion of...
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Urban atrocity and immoral victories Values hold no authority when deliberating against thieves Illusions of what's important and what it is to be or not to be, free The farther we go the further apart we grow To be a seed from his tree is to know the will of him But now the apple has fallen as the branch rips from the stem Legal biz, legal sorcery placing foes at bay Words casting magical spells to keep the crooked from being put away Who said magic wasn't real? If we know its an illusion of...
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Rejected?!! Passion compels me to write!
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I really enjoyed the poem. It gave me great thought as I read through line by line. The second stanza just really threw me for a loop. In a line it says "As the soul begs excessively to be free". What is the soul trying to be free from? One would assume the physical body as you pointed out in the third stanza "As now the soul is lifed from it's heavy shell". But what I'm not sure of is if the soul was begging to be free from it's heavy shell (human body) then how can "physical limitations ove...
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