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AGE: 57
LOC: Red Bluff, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 29

I’ve been bouncing all over the place for the last 40 years or so since I got beat up at the Democratic Convention in ‘68, watched my friends get mowed down at Kent State in ‘70 and fried my brain at all the festivals I went to after that. Joined the Coast Guard, got straight, went to school, got a degree and have been married to the same woman for the last 25 years with three grown kids who keep coming back home. Had a streak of more than 500 magazine and newspaper articles years back and now I’m concentrating on writing fiction. I enjoy the interplay between reader and writer, i.e., the reader creates the story even more than the writer could ever imagine. Have written five books and hope they will be published someday. Well, one has b…

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-2- Lou was on the road before 7:30 the next morning. He=d stopped at a Burger King and had gotten a coffee and ham and egg sandwich from the drive-through and now he was cruising down Highway 101 south away from town. The scenery changed from coastal to primeval forest in a matter of minutes. This was the big forest, the California redwoods forest, and he loved it. The trees were one of the reasons he=d moved there after he got out of the Merchant. The sky was gray and overcast and a light r...
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Short Story / Apple Seeds
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“Yes,” she said, still wondering what in the hell (or heaven?) she was getting into. But she was excited. “I’ll do it.” She was at peace with her answer and anxious to explore this strange new twist in her life. -2- Jack Evans didn’t know whether he was coming or going. The doctors at the sanitarium had tried so many drugs on him that he was no longer sure of his true feelings and thoughts. He had been hallucinating at times, in a dark depression at other t...
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Action Adventure / Pandora's Succession
Great story! There are some minor flaws that could be easily fixed by a good editor but all in all, I think it's publishable given that you maintin your tension and come up with a plausible ending. So, hang in there Mr. Big Seller, it looks like you've got a winner on your hands. I've done a lot of reviews and I've never selected a piece as a favorite, but I'm going to do that with yours. So many young writers fail to realize that there is publishablity and there is fictional writing. This is...
Short Story / Broken Fences
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Novel Treatments / Revenge (always taste so sweet)
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Short Story / PICTOGRAGH, PECTOGLYPH
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Novel Treatments / Charlie's Mirror - Prologue
I liked your story and think you have a definite knack for writing. Keep up the good work. I'm 57 and just getting the hang of it now. Keep the drama up through the whole piece. It's short enough to do that. Make it scary, make that reader feel chilled to the bone. Just one suggestion. Or have them fall in love or something. Anything to wind up on a dramatic note. Also, "show," don't "tell" the reader. Use descriptive words and show the reader what people look like, how they think, what the s...