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AGE: 20
LOC: New Zealand
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 14

So i found i quite like French & jazz music, you know the type: Dean Martin,Nat king Cole, St Germain, Gotan project,Thievery corporation  etc etc. I love being tucked away in the corner of a cute Coffee shop while its raining, having a cup of hot coffee that helps to keep my fingers warm. I’d be either reading a good book or talking to someone I care about and feel so comfortable around.

I’m Beginning to like wine…more champaign than wine though. Food is amazing! I love how people can put such effort into something so small, and taste twice the size! Rain is wonderful, Sun is fantastic. And my bed is one of my “Seven wonders of the world” I love being in bed…...wait? This all sounds just wrong.I’m saying this all in the cleanest …

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Action Adventure / The North Belmont Tribe
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The North Belmont Tribe I partly felt sorry for these people that i saw; lost and confused with no hope in site. But then i also had a selfish happiness that they where like that. Why? Because then they were one less person to worry about in this world. This world had become filth; and i was apart of it all. But I also had pitty on them. Just seeing them scuttle around with complete fare in their eyes, not knowing when they where going to get killed next. The horse stomped his foot as if he w...
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To the Hills we run, in Hill Dwellers we become. Time went far to fast; I don't think I can still remember what happened. Only a few things would pop up from my memory when something had jolted it in reminder. I remember flashes of my parents panicking, grabbing as much as they could and yelling things from across the room. They were telling me where to meet, what to pack and where to go. Most of all; “Don't panic honey! Its going to be ok.” My father was saying to me with both hands on my sh...
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Action Adventure / What do you see?
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The currents hit hard against her only protection. The land imitated the sea at her travelers feet. Eyes lay upon giants of the land ahead. The sound of a kings calling made her look to the heavens. It was time to continue. Thunder started to sound with every hit of the ground. The pace quickened as so did the current that flowed through her living hair.
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 Plus-button Clarity
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14 Reviews   11 Comments
so yer....i started with Urbis thing a wee while ago...and yer it startd off all good....but theres a few things that are total lame..... first i think the points one is a bit lame'o....but fair enuf coz its the only way to make ppl read other stuff but still..... and then i've had my stuff up on this freak for agez and i havnt even had ne activity! i like writing action fantasy...but man do i need some work on my writing....I've done so many stories but yet never finishd ne.....LOZER! i come...
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The corner is dark. The hoods lifted up. Shadows carve into a perfect face. Thick pools look up under nicely coated lashes. A grin flickers across. Leaving my heart on stand still. Knuckles with history are slammed into worn pockets. Strong borders hunch over from bad posture. The upper frame moves in slow smooth motion to the controlling beat like the sea. Could he get any sexier?
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Poetry / The Ice Queen
That was so beautiful. It was so sad, but then right at the end it show hope for the one that wished to love her that the Queen herself. Awesome.
Haha thats so sweet. I enjoyed the change of few. For me i was both think of the animal and human way in which this story was going. if that makes any sense?
Even tho i'm not a good writer, I still think that you wrote that really good. it was easy to read and i got what you meant. i enjoyed it. :)
Poetry / Humor
Hey that was really interesting. it like changed. left me thinking....."what?" not in like a bad way though. At the start it sounds like its going to be a fantasy type of peace and then it fully changed in the last 2 paragraphs.....unless i'm totally wrong and i've fully read it the wrong way.
Man i totally agree with you on this. there is some complete tossers out there that some how think that there criticism is always right, and yet its no where near helpful and is really just a load of pointless words. They give us their blunt opinion and not ideas and help. Rar! lol
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