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Action Adventure / The North Belmont Tribe
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The North Belmont Tribe I partly felt sorry for these people that i saw; lost and confused with no hope in site. But then i also had a selfish happiness that they where like that. Why? Because then they were one less person to worry about in this world. This world had become filth; and i was apart of it all. But I also had pitty on them. Just seeing them scuttle around with complete fare in their eyes, not knowing when they where going to get killed next. The horse stomped his foot as if he w...
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To the Hills we run, in Hill Dwellers we become. Time went far to fast; I don't think I can still remember what happened. Only a few things would pop up from my memory when something had jolted it in reminder. I remember flashes of my parents panicking, grabbing as much as they could and yelling things from across the room. They were telling me where to meet, what to pack and where to go. Most of all; “Don't panic honey! Its going to be ok.” My father was saying to me with both hands on my sh...
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Action Adventure / What do you see?
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The currents hit hard against her only protection. The land imitated the sea at her travelers feet. Eyes lay upon giants of the land ahead. The sound of a kings calling made her look to the heavens. It was time to continue. Thunder started to sound with every hit of the ground. The pace quickened as so did the current that flowed through her living hair.
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 Plus-button Clarity
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so yer....i started with Urbis thing a wee while ago...and yer it startd off all good....but theres a few things that are total lame..... first i think the points one is a bit lame'o....but fair enuf coz its the only way to make ppl read other stuff but still..... and then i've had my stuff up on this freak for agez and i havnt even had ne activity! i like writing action fantasy...but man do i need some work on my writing....I've done so many stories but yet never finishd ne.....LOZER! i come...
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The corner is dark. The hoods lifted up. Shadows carve into a perfect face. Thick pools look up under nicely coated lashes. A grin flickers across. Leaving my heart on stand still. Knuckles with history are slammed into worn pockets. Strong borders hunch over from bad posture. The upper frame moves in slow smooth motion to the controlling beat like the sea. Could he get any sexier?
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Short Story / Not completely.
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I'm sitting in my bed. A slight glow embraces the room from my bed side lamp. My feet hug the hot water bottle that is snuggled into the flannelet sheets. I look out upon the dark sky. Tonight it is no longer black, but filled with a deep dark gray. Stopping me from seeing the blackness of eternity. Instead the sky gives me wet droplets to watch as they fall down my bedroom window. Each rain drop taking over for each star I'm missing tonight. I'm comforted by the sky falling softly on my wind...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / When alone
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The currents hit hard against her only protection. The land imitated the sea at her travelers feet. Eyes lay upon giants of the land ahead. The sound of a kings calling made her look to the heavens. It was time to continue. Thunder started to sound with every hit of the ground. The pace quickened as so did the current that flowed through her living hair.
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Looking Dangerous
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The barrel was black as the midnight sky. It with held such power that caused death itself. Covered in platinum sliver; light bounced of it in fear. Its purpose was to stop life in its tracks. Like a full stop did with a sentence. A creation that was born to kill. But it was made so nicely it became attractive. It was beautiful with every sliding edge. It made you want to hold it; hold its power, have your flesh wrapped around its body. Fitting so nicely. Pointing straight and looking down pa...
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Romance / Love
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A Decadent taste, smooth and delicious that it hugs your tongue so nicely. Your eyes are teased with boxes and ribbons, glinted with quality labeled stickers. Gold linings across the ceilings, and the walls clothed in deep reds that makes you feel so warm. Your eyes flickering across the welcoming prizes. Soft lips you lick in excitement. All asking you to pick them, all sitting there in class. So tasteful, So loved,Beauty would be its second name. Loved by women all around the world, made to...
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Romance / Your Strong Flavor
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Her Hair dangled down her covered chest. Green eyes lifted up underneath thick eye lashes. She bit her thick glossy bottom lip. Delicately painted pink nails sat on well crafted fingers. Her right hand clung to her popped hip. She leaned against the small space on the wall. Her eyes stayed fixed on him. His body perfectly chizzled to the very bone. Dark eyes looking down on her. His body towered over hers like a shadow. He brought himself a footstep closer to her. Strong carved hands pressed ...
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