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AGE: 27
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 08

Ok, first and foremore I am a photographer first, and only.  I am not a great english master, in fact i never went beyond what i was required to take becuase I was told my interpretatiosn of the english language were wrong, so screw them.  I write for me when I feel out of it, and I can’t take pictures.  But seriously, I am better at pictures I swear.

Check me out on myspace: I am Untouchable Photography.

Kyle

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To begin I am a very jealous person, and very competitive, which overlap some times. I am jealous when someone does better than me at something, and I have cases of extreme jealously when I am stuck doing something dim while other people are out enjoying excitement and experiencing new things, or at the very least participating in something out of the ordinary. This creates a deep sickness in my stomach and a profound rage in my mind, which is completely uncalled for in most cases, but it pre...
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Poetry / Take me home
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Take me home whenever And Use me as you may. Take me home tomorrow, today. Say that I make you pretty Say that you'll make me stay. Please take me home tomorrow today. Speak the hollow words of a fool Who has never known true days. I beg you take me home tomorrow, today. The path you chose was rough Yet you showed me the way Taking me home, tomorrow, today. Your hand was warm agasint mine As in the wind it swayed. Moving farther from home tomorrow, today. You walked me home in the dark Even a...
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I am your friend Hold me tightly Hold me close Let me see for you Let me be your memory. I am a part of you Take me everywhere Let me hang from your neck And Dangle at your side I will never leave you. I came late But I am still here I will be here until You grow tired of me I hope that never happens.
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Poetry / Black and White
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I see the earth in Back and White. A monochrome world where There is a wrong and there is a right. It is not amazing, no sight to see. But the world is bleeding black and white And that is enough to scare me. There are not Technicolor schemes. No vibrant imaginative scenes. Only the worlds' wavering dreams. But infinite shades of gray You propose? I guess they Could exist, I suppose. Not in my world though, no not here. Life is black and white And I live in a world of fear. There is always a ...
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The content of the poem is really good, and a novel idea. I do not understand the title though. A little choppy at parts. But i have no major issues with this. It is very descriptive, replacing a few words with some that have a little more punch may work out better.
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And so will the opportunity. Kyle
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Very true. Kyle
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Ok, in all hoesnty you have have avery unique style using the & symbol and refusing to abide by any sort of stanza form. But the subject matter of this particualr poem is very close to me, since i had the same thing happen, and quite frankly while simple, it is raw and full of emotion that i can feel. If anything I woudl maybe think about taking the last line out maybe end it like "Maybe I shouldn’t have said I Love You first all those years ago..." Leave the character in the middle of a thou...
The first stanza is very very good, the third, not so much, while you get your point across it is not done well or with the rest of the poem in mind, choosing differnt words here that convey the same meaning will produce a much better product.
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