good job steph lol i lovve eminem and fall out boy omg!!!!!! and fergie fergalicouss

that was excellent oh my gosh love is undescribable, its everything you want to say it is but you cant becasue you dont know how to and so you call it love, its like, the persone you love, could be your solmate, or not, but its just who it is that makes it so undescribable di dyou write that yourself??

that was excellent i looked at it as the pain and fristeration peo[le have - just like the author, how the ignorance of people with authority or non, can effect someone deeply, they feel like they are going to die so slowly they will if they keep beign treated that way. time, like you said about the clock, keeps going and it gets ''sick'' obviopusly not literally, but people should value it - time - very interesting...

its a very sketchy poem, something you really have to think about.... im going to guess that it means that the boy had thoughts of his own that he thought were bad, so he was a bitter person? then when he says whats on his mind out loud he gets rejected by the others whodig into him, and he thinks of himself as dirt.. the boy that you are talking about could reflect on how you feel about the world, others, even yourself.... am i close? do ou get what i mean?

that was really touching, but at the end it through me off because i think i misinterpreted it... does it mean that you chopped her up? i dont know but the lines above it were really true, becausei feel as though i cannot remmeber anything that he and i did said or felt, but somehow i still feel it, its hard to explain.... but i think i know what you mean...