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AGE:
31
LOC: Bloomington, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 17
LOC: Bloomington, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 17
Art suduces me and writing is the will to profect the balance of this untamed and surreal life we live in.
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Can you help, I'm lost and I just can not find, the truth that lives inside of me tonight. I just wanna be the sparkle in your eye. That shooting star you wish upon. The hope that lives inside a song. Can you tell me, what I'm I to do about it. All these doors just seem to shut. But I don't wanna ever give up. Tell me now, Please tell me what to do, I'm driven by curiosity, and I just don't know what to do. Don't come around me, Just let the memories fade away. and I'll just try to close my e...
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Jericho reaches for another bottle of reason, as Hermes looks with grief and despair and subtlely shakes his head. Adagio on the other hand, dosen't seem to notice nor does he seem to care. Or maybe he's just so involved in being pre-occupied. Never-the-less, the obtuse thinking on Jericho's part dosen't seem to fade or even penetrate Adagios relentless fascination with open doors and windows. "What happened to us?" Hermes finnally gets the courage to speak, yet it comes out in a whisper. "G...
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I agree with what you have to write. Goals are important for everyone, even the successful ones... Is the Peticular piece something that you are going to persue? As far as getting pub? Sounds like it should be a insert to a pamphlet in a drug rehabilitaion program. Over all sounds good.
pieces like this make me swollen with inspiration.... the structure of this piece I think needs paragraghs and some punctuation. Overall I dig your work on this piece. "I stood in tatters"
Wow, I was at the edge of my seat the whole time, I really enjoyed reading this. I was kinda skeptical as far as sci-fi. I'm not a huge fan of it, But this, This is a GREAT piece. Will there be more this? I'm anxious to read. Vladimir, the stinking skin of the creatures and mystic tents and the on going excitment. Keep this going.
I think I might know whats going on. The last breath of a dying soul inside of a Hospital. Atleast thats where this piece took me. This was a good piece, I enjoy creative views like this one.
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