Adonis's profile
AGE:
22
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 05
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 05
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I’ve gone through so much these past couple of months.. mi mind body and soul is jus goin thru a whirl-wind right now and im tryn to find a place to focus my steps… they were once planted in love but they can no longer stay there.. i pray one day they are welcomed back…
that story will b completed more soon..
i never thought i could go thru so much at one time but i believe in everything happenin for a reason and nothn bein put on me that i can’t handle so im fightin the fight.. battle after battle of dreamin of her each time i close mi eyes.. wonderin if shes goin thru the same thing.. i love her the same and i hope she feels no shame.. babygirl uve become mi world and i support you in everything.. ill…
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I cry a cry unheard for a love that isn't Wonderin day and night if you eva hear me And if you did, would you come and get me Rescue me from this cold, cruel world Dat has me in this dead bolt hold I walk around everyday with a smile Laughing a laughter that could b heard a mile Seemin to be happy, seeming to be free When inside I'm crying for someone to hear me I feel like a walkin storm Lightenin strikes mi heart Thunder rumbles mi soul Mi heart bleeds tears Dat sumtimes overflow and run fr...
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theres sumdn wrong with my baby..she didnt speak to me las night theres sumdn wrong with my baby..cauz erthang i said started a fight i dno whas wrong with my baby..is it me, does she want to leave me she looked at me with tears in her eyes but when i asked whas wrong she said nothin to my surprise when we're talkin i sumhow always offend her she feels as if im againgst her but shes the only one id surrender all of me and let the rest be i ask and i ask wha am i doin, wha can i do cauz in my ...
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if i died today..would u miss me tomorrow? would u cry would u feel dat a part of u died with me? wha if i didnt die physically but inside my soul did would u try to bring me back to life or say oh well and delete me and ak as if i didnt exist at all if i lived my life in depression 90% of the time would u try to decrease it to 0% or say u cant handle bein my friend cauz i bring u down or u dnt want anyone in ur life goin thru wha i go thru cauz u have better things to do? if i was in a finan...
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if i were down and out would u help me out if i needed someone to talk to would it matter wha it was about if i needed a friend would u b tru or smile and pretend dat i could trust u wha if i had a broken heart and my life jus totally fell apart would u help put the pieces together if i tol u my darkest secret would u b able to keep it if i gave u the key to da rest of my heart would u break in and rip it apart or fill in the empty parts if i wanted a new beginnin would u give me a boost i ha...
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DNT LEAVE ME STAY 4GIVE ME FOR BEIN RUDE ITS JUS SOMETIMES U SEEM TOO GOOD TO B TRU AND IM SCARED TO LOVE U CAUZ OF WHA U MITE DO I DONT MEAN TO OFFEND U BUT IM JUS NOT USE TO SUM1 QUITE LIKE U READY AND WILLIN STANDIN BY MY SIDE THRU MY HEARTS SLO HEALIN U PUT DA PIECES BACK 2GETHA N THEN HELD EM THRU STORMY WEATHER DATS A NEW ONE FO ME U REALLY BEIN HERE FO ME AH MAN THIS REALLY CANT B YES DIS MAY B...LOVE NOW EVEN THO I FEEL U WONT PLZ DNT DROP ME I DNT THINK I COULD TAKE IT MY LIFE WOULD ...
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I LIKE THIS. IM FEELIN SIMILAR TO THIS ABOUT SOMEONE NOW, HAHA. IT CAN B HARD DEALIN WITH WANTIN SOMEONE U JUS CANT HAVE FOR WHATEVER REASON. I LIKE THE WORDS U CHOSE, THEY BROUGHT ME INTO IT AND I COULD SEE THE STORY HAPPENIN AS I READ THRU..."SO CLOSE BUT UNABLE TO TOUCH"
goin thru the 'unthinkable' break up is hard aint it? i like the way u put this. i understand basically everything ure saying. i like how u said in the end like how ull remember how all u needed was each other and how ull never give in to sin if u could have it all back again.
id love to hear the song to this. this is very good to me. i like the words you chose to express your feelings. id prob neva think to use antagonism in a song. lol. ive been in a some what similar situation so i guess that might play into why i like it so much. its a shame how people will do you sometimes huh?
im in a situation now that's makin me want to say "Im Gone"! i like that a lot. ima have to let her read this becauz that's how i feel sometimes. ive been there be4 and its not good at all to go back. '“There there, there there now.â Some one say to me. I need words of comfort to help me through it all.'.... i could use the comfort of someone sayin that to me also! the ending couldve been a little better to me though. leaving it with ure gone wouldve been stronger becauz itll leave the person...
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