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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / The Curse of Akrilia
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The Curse of Akrilia The Security Officer, Holmis arrived late on the canteen section after a long session in the Holodeck. He sat down near to Dr Suwok who was examining a strange piece of equipment left behind by a visitor. It was a fine, thick plated tube with a broad gold band at one end. Along the side was an inscription 'To Jamiter, from his friends at OCH'. It was a reassuring device that an old-fashion planet-side doctor might carry. The equipment on the latest starships was much more...
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Harry Potter and the Christmas Tree By Adrian Campbell Act One Father Christmas. The Weasleys House Narrator A fire roared in the big fireplace and the Weasleys lounge smelled of fir and pine cones. There was laughter and happy voices, yet somehow Harry couldn’t relax and enjoy it. Something was bothering him. When the Weasleys stared to sing “Silent Sprite” and “God Rest ye Merry Hippogryphs” an unbearable ache welled up inside of him. He quietly went and grabbed his coat. Fred Harry, where ...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Alien and Essence
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Alien and Essence. Discovery It was getting quite dark when he took his last dive. It was freezing. "Where is it, Uncle" he thought to himself as the black rocks in the water loomed up in front of him. The air in his mouthpiece tasted of rubber. Gary glanced at his waterproof notepad at his Uncle's mysterious instructions. Suddenly it was no longer murky and he could see the seabed clearly. Despite the cold water, the ring he was wearing felt hot on his finger. He saw a door. "Well, well" tho...
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I'll have to read the previous chapters to understand the context of this chapter. There seemed to be a fair bit of explaination about the eye disease that got boring, but I suppose is important leter one. I didn't understand what 'R-' and 'Com-' were meant to be ? An M90 shotgun and a M9x pistol ? All these weapns are M9 something which seems unlikely. Why don't they trust computers ? If they are in a spaceship I'd expect trusting computers was an everyday occurrence. perhaps a bitof back st...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Ancient Child : Prologue
I liked this story. The world of these law priests is fascinating, cruel and unpredictable. Is the child of Gableen's vision the same as the baby in the carriage ? Will this child grow up to threaten the law priests. I imagine the law priests to be the same as the cruel and evil imams of islamic jihad who encourage terrorists and suicide bombers. The child is the new saviour of freedom and will fight against repression and cruelty. probably a long fight with many interesting battles. Perhaps ...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Heaven's Tears - Chapter 1
A potentially interesting story, where Salathiel is the second coming of Jesus ? Carriel is his brother, who will perhaps be tempted to the dark side by Satan and Satan's angels? It would be good in the first chapter to also introduce Satan's Angels who have been thrown down to Earth in the same way as you have introduced the good angels, since I would guess that Satan would also be aware of the birth of the second coming and be motivated to destroy Salathiel? I was a bit confused that Gabrie...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Lycan Prologue
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / 3rd chapter of murder at miller's farm
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