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AGE: 21
LOC: Haverhill, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 01

My name is Alex.

I’ve written quite a number of short stories, some of which are posted here. I like to think my pieces are unique and offer something a little different than everything else out there.

I’m also working on a novel called “Island of Paradise”.

Hit me up on Myspace: www.myspace.com/itsclassicalanyways

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Short Story / Devour
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The fork plunged into her arm, and as I raised the knife to cut out a piece of flesh, she moaned with desire. With the delicacy of a newborn I slowly lifted the fork to my mouth and began chewing as she watched with a ravenous stare. With each bite her hands slid down her chest until she met her panties and a feverous groping fiesta erupted; masturbation and mastication. With the skin swallowed I raised my eyes and spoke with in a lustful hush, “Your turn.” Her hand remained on...
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Short Story / Under The Tree
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There were echoes all around them, their shadows delirious and only existed in short spurts under the breath of the streetlights. They danced as their cigarettes leaked calligraphy across the night sky and she tried to trace it with her finger. He asked her what it said and she replied “it’s a secret to the stars.” The smoke towered over them for a few moments, observing before dissipating into the darkness and she took the cancerous pen to her lips to write some more. There was a light veil...
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Short Story / Red Balloons
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She was surrounded by wrinkly skin and the memories escaping from their false teeth. Towering over them in their shrunken elderly stage as they clasped their hands around her waist and smiled, telling her that only yesterday she was a little girl. Around them all was a forest of lawn chairs and tables, plastic bowls of potato chips and fruit, coolers of soda and a grill overloaded with hamburgers and hotdogs. Tied to each chair and strewn all over the porch were white balloons. The plan had ...
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Short Story / Pieces of Glass
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Mom says it hurt like a bitch to push me out of her. My arm was broken and she took me to a glassblower who blew a new one for me. “You’re lucky I’m a good mother,” she says. I’m upstairs with my boyfriend Andrew; he’s lying on my bed while I try on new clothes. “So you could like go back to that glassblower and have him blow you bigger tits or something right?” I throw a rumpled shirt at him, “shut up.” He laughs and it’s so cute I laugh too. “What’s wrong with my tits?” I ask, and I shake ...
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Short Story / Devour
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16 Reviews   17 Comments
The fork plunged into her arm, and as I raised the knife to cut out a piece of flesh, she moaned with desire. With the delicacy of a newborn I slowly lifted the fork to my mouth and began chewing as she watched with a ravenous stare. With each bite her hands slid down her chest until she met her panties and a feverous groping fiesta erupted; masturbation and mastication. With the skin swallowed I raised my eyes and spoke with in a lustful hush, “your turn.” Her hand remained on her panties f...
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Short Story / A Perfect Zero
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Short Story / So blind you can see...
This actually makes perfect sense and I think it describes a good majority of people in the world right now. This totally works and the statement is clear (at least for those with their eyes open). Good job!
Short Story / First and Second Blurbs
I like this piece, it was definitely exciting and well written. I was a little unfulfilled at the end however, the reasoning for all of this is so vague. Why is she being hunted, how did this killing occur in the first place? You get us into the action and keep the reader interested but there are still a few questions left unanswered. One grammar thing I noticed: "in Amara’s calves and thighs were on fire, but yet she pressed forward fueled" You don't need the but there. All in all this was a...
Short Story / MESSENGER GIRL
I applaud you on the ending, I really didn't see that coming at all! This was actually pretty creepy, very Twilight Zone. The transition between a happy opening and a sad ending was done very well. You have some great details in here and I like the allusion of the transvestites towards the overall theme of the story. Well done, I enjoyed it.
This definitely works as a Christmas gift for friends, I like the idea of writing something (or doing anything artsy) for a gift. Out of the gift context though I'm not sure it works as well. I like the general idea of the piece although the ending did seem a little cheesy (but with this being a gift it does work) and came across to me like one of those e-mail chain letter type stories. You have some well crafted sentences here despite some grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing too maj...
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