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it isn’t sorry for who it loves, it doesn’t erase the places where memory made small burn marks. this read so true it's very chillin to read.. i like the your poem structure, i think it gives the poem the right feel... nice easy read kinda of flow, it was very nice to read....thank you for sharing......alex

Ripping apart Each delicate petal From their weave; Tearing at The surrounding leaves, Separating their grip, Crushing them Between my pale fingers this part of the stanza started sending goose bumps down my arms... its amazing how much you were able to capture...great usage of beautiful words.....thank you for sharing.....Alex

wow, i'm really amazed on the quality of this poem...you have written this beautifully....it shows you took your time and it's very well thoughtout.... simple things of life, you have captured them so magically....i applaud you on this great piece...thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece.......Alex

ah, the misteries of the unknown... i like the questions this piece left on my mind..... to me, it was a very thought provoking piece....often times i've wonder myself about situations..... will i ever stop wandering myself...... I’ll never know the answer The mystery I still ponder But till I solve this mystery From flame to flame I’ll wander i love the way you tied up the whole poem with this last stanza...very fitting for the whole poem.....good job, i enjoyed reading this piece.......than...