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LAST LOGIN: April 04
LAST LOGIN: April 04
I’m 20 years and a little lost in this world. I’ve never felt like I fit in and as I’ve gotten older…I’ve started to wonder if i really want to fit in. Why the hell do I want to lower myself to fit in with all the rude concieted hypocritical short sited people that I hate? The answer: I just want to know what it feels like to belong for once…to have friends and be sure that they really ARE my friends. I don’t know. I’m just looking for some input on my work…it’s the one thing I’ve ever been proud of but I’ve been to afraid to show anyone so…I decided it’s time to find out if there’s anything to this writing thhing for me or if I should just let it go now.
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I’m going crazy, You’re coming with me. Everyone’s invited, Taking you all with me. To my world where I can play, Sing my songs in my own way. Games we’re playing, Rules don’t count, Everyone is winning. Take some time to look around, At my world of crazy. Everybody wants to stay, In my world of crazy. Taking turns at losing it. Bloody sunshine stings a bit. At least I know I’m breathing. Rock and rock and rock some more, I’m going crazier. Follow me to crazy, Dance and sing and play all day,...
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Something builds me, Something breaks me, That’s just how my story goes. Up and Down, Left and right, I want to stand for just a while, Leave my bricks to me. Take one out, And I might crumble, Leave my bricks to me. Take one out, You’ll hear the rumble, Watch me fumble, Leave my bricks to me. Something builds me, Something breaks me, That’s just how my story goes.
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As one drives through all the newly developed neighborhoods of the upper class, one assumes that in such a large home, with such nice cars in the driveways, that there is happiness within. Not many would guess that on the inside of those houses, outwardly clad with the largest of jungle gyms, the nicest of landscaping, the most desirable of children’s’ toys, there is nothing but empty space. There’s an emptiness that can’t be filled with even the most extravagant of decorating or the most di...
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I was looking at a friend today... My very best friend I remembered that the day I met her... I wanted to be her... She's so pretty, I'm talking gorgeous... She's not a genius but she's artistic She’s always seemed happy I know her life isn't perfect, because whose is... But it never seemed to bother her... She seemed happy enough... Happier than me... But today, I saw her lose it Her troubles have been piling up She's so quiet about all of it... We were in her room, she was looking in her mi...
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Looking through this wall of tears Everything is blurry I can't see straight I can't think straight Walking through this hall of fears Everyone is watching I can hear them The whispers pierce my ears Story's keep on growing From little seeds of truth Lies just keep on flowing People successfully destroying my youth
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I like this alot. Self mutilation is apparent here but not in an overbearing way, its very subtle. But I like the description of numbness and the description of everything that a mutilator is.
I really like the prayer. You're right that it's very free form and it doesnt wrap up cleanly, however it is poetry and its about you and your words. It makes sense and if thats the way the words came, then maybe thats how they should stay? If you really aren't happy with it, perhaps you could bring it around again, using the mirror images and then echo part of the prayer? "Mirror imagination figments reluctant to believe in each other. I’m not married. I’m not married.I’mnotmarried.Imnotmarr...
Please correct me if I'm wrong, as I too would be a little upset if my words were misinterpreted but this poem really speaks of empty promises and lost dreams with no hope of revival. I understand when the black takes over, just when you thought it was gone and it holds you back in everything you do. You keep your words short and simple and I like that.
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