AmyChait's profile
AGE:
23
LOC: Dallas, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 12
LOC: Dallas, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 12
I wrote my first poem when I was 11 years old, and since then, writing has become a passion I cannot live without. Writing is not only an art, but a way of life to see the extraordinary in the ordinary. My writing sometimes can be considered prose over poetry. But as Percy Shelley, from the Defence of Poetry, said, “The distinction between poets and prose writers is a vulgar error.” On a side note, when I give critiques, I make it clear it is my opinion. People should not ever correct another individual saying something “is” one thing, and not another. Our beliefs make social truths, so I am firm believer in taking writing, art, with a new lens of perspective and not focusing so much on what poetry should be. I’m just a lover of words.
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Spend less time being disappointed with people and spend more time being the change you want to see
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Settling is not about a predictable life, but more about suppressing something you live for and suffocating it with social norms.
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I tasted poor this evening when I reluctantly chose pinto beans for dinner, and reminded myself, life could be worse, as we always do when we desperately comfort ourselves. Indeed, things could be worse then an overdrawn account, multiple maxed out credit cards mothering my debt, while I am a child with no groceries. My mouth became watered from bitter seasoning coaxing my tongue with curses and panic basked when I cooked the beans, spinning round, and round, in the microwave while my eyes im...
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I begin to reek of loneliness when glancing at my reflection in the bathroom mirror after arriving home with a guy’s sweatshirt, unlikely to be returned, and place a coy grin, admiring more than comfort of fabric, more so, for the way I can wrap myself in something other than my own belongings, however, he does not belong to me, nor do I belong to him, I’m just a fickle being left cuffing the sweatshirt sleeves with my fingers to grasp last night’s memories of our foolish a...
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i don’t remember the last time i cried, and i want to, to feel relief of reminiscing, to feel despise of vulnerability, to feel, something. of intense passion, passion that swells eyes, tinting cheeks red of knotted emotion, liberating my suppressed words of loneliness. i want to remember i’m human, and i want to, to know i’m insane, to know i treaded around the same circle, to know, me. without you.
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I think this is kind of contradictory, their identity becomes unknown yet they become their own brand -- because when I think of brand I think a specific collection from a designer. I am able to put the idea together with the title, but the quote itself doesn't give me a direction for your point about media -- why should we realize that a model's face will fade? Maybe highlight the insignificance and propaganda for the point of this quote :)
I would would an "and" between "defines yesterday and "creates tomorrow" with out a comma. Great idea, and also one more suggestion, maybe a more lively, unique word instead of "create."
I think the second sentence could be a quote on its own. The placement of tinder made me question if it used correctly, but then realized scent, photo, glance etc can be the flammable objects that strike the spark...I think if you could restructure the sentence a bit using that great metaphor, the first sentence alone could be its own quote too. In addition, I think brightly sounds cliche next to burn, and possibly refer to other adjectives of light relevant to flame. example: "A memory burns...
Good consistency in form with lines,paragraph an repetition, and I appreciate your message. I not only agree, but I generally enjoy pointing our irony in language and how we practice meaning. Small thing, I think on the 1st stanza, 2nd line you can cut out "that" to avoid excess word usage. Also, in "we needn't worry" seems like an awkward read to me, maybe something like "We do not need to worry.." Then in the 2nd stanza, the last two lines the beginning of each word are capitalized and just...
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