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AGE: 17
LOC: Clintonville, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 09

    I first found out about Urbis from a few friends of mine, so i logged on, and now im almost hooked.  

    Alot of these stories and poems are coming straight from my heart, almost all of them have things that have truly happened in my life…
and this is the only way i can let it all out without getting critisized in a bad way

thanx for taking the time to read this, and i have a myspace…
www.myspace.com/crystaljacobsangel
just send me a friend request

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Young Adult / My story
Version 1
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It was a normal Saturday night for us, sitting in his basement, watching our favorite horror movies. We were both sprawled out on the couch, just relaxing and enjoying each others company. We sat and watched three movies; Silent Hill, The House of Wax, and The Hills Have Eyes. By the time the last movie was over it was almost three in the morning, so we ended up just falling asleep on the couch. The next morning, Tad, Jeremy’s older brother came down and woke us up. I sat up and said good mor...
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Young Adult / True love?
Version 6
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It was a normal Saturday night for us, sitting in his basement, watching our favorite horror movies. We were both sprawled out on the couch, just relaxing and enjoying each others company. We sat and watched three movies; Silent Hill, The House of Wax, and The Hills Have Eyes. By the time the last movie was over it was almost three in the morning, so we ended up just falling asleep on the couch. The next morning, Tad, Jeremy’s older brother came down and woke us up. I sat up and said good mo...
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Short Story / untitled
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Jen leaned against the pale brick wall as Mr.Adams kept going on. She looked past him, out the window where she could see the courtyard. Once mrs.Adams was done explaining the rules, he introduced her to Jesse, then walked away. "uh, hi. I'm Jesse, we have some classes together, so, I was asked to show you around" Jesse said as he ran a hand through his tousled dark brown hair. "Hi, I'm Jen. Nice to meet you,." Jen said as she fidgeted with her pen. "So, mind if I ask what school you transfer...
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Jen leaned against the pale brick wall as Mr.Adams kept going on. She looked past him, out the window where she could see the courtyard. Once mrs.Adams was done explaining the rules, he introduced her to Jesse, then walked away. "uh, hi. I'm Jesse, we have some classes together, so, I was asked to show you around" Jesse said as he ran a hand through his tousled dark brown hair. "Hi, I'm Jen. Nice to meet you,." Jen said as she fidgeted with her pen. "So, mind if I ask what school you transfer...
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Version 2
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Jen leaned against the pale brick wall as Mr.Adams kept going on. She looked past him, out the window where she could see the courtyard. Once mrs.Adams was done explaining the rules, he introduced her to Jesse, then walked away. "uh, hi. I'm Jesse, we have some classes together, so, I was asked to show you around" Jesse said as he ran a hand through his tousled dark brown hair. "Hi, I'm Jen. Nice to meet you,." Jen said as she fidgeted with her pen. "So, mind if I ask what school you transfer...
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Poetry / We are...
I really love the feeling you gave this. the thoiught you put into writing this was great. I hope you keep writing.
Poetry / I Am Meth
Wow.I really like this poem, I like how you made it come to life, I enjoyed reading this, it also lets the reader know what goes on when somebody does meth... I also like he way you begin it and end it, I hope you write more. Good luck in all you do. Keep Writing Crystal Michelle
Poetry / Truth
oh my gosh.. i am so sorry if you lost somone. i mean, i can really sense the pain you must of had to go through to write this, it is a great poem, i really really hope you keep writing, and as i said before, im sorry about your loss
Poetry / Fight
i like this peom... i can really relate to it... only, he lied, but i really like the way you set it up, it has a nice flow about it.. i hope you keep writing! Crystal
Poetry / Away
i really like the way you used symbolism here, it really makes a difference (at least to me it does) and i really hope you keep on writing Crystal
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