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AGE: 26
LOC: Tulsa, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 03

I never thought that I would ever write a book, I have written some poetry. Which runs in my family. My greatmother was published. She would basically write about the small things in life and together with her words she brought everything even so small to life. The book that I am currently writing is based off of real experiences, in my own life and each character has their own story.

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Novel Treatments / Chapter 3 symphony of Souls
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Chapter 3 the Meeting I remember the first moment I met him, I held my head down as I spoke to him and Quinn in the sitting room of Kane’s estate. I could not look into his eyes. “What’s wrong me I thought”. “I always look into person’s eyes when I speak to them. After all, that’s how father raised me. I could hear him in my far off memory of my childhood. “Dominique you should always look into their eyes, it’s a manner of respect and dignity“. This is just one of the many lessons, I learned ...
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Novel Treatments / Chapter 1 & 2 Symphony of Souls
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Chapter 1 the Journey one Kane was making his long journey to England, He had been on ship for over three months making his way to his new home. Energy and morale was not to be found for, most were sick, and they were running short on supplies. Kane knew nothing of sailing; most his journey was spent writing his life down, and going over the many memories of his past. The ship was old, but sturdy it creaked and moaned as the wind hit the sails. He looked across the mass of the British Sea tha...
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Tears For mother Earth Love has fallen beneath my feet. To water mother earth. Tears scattered like bird seed upon the ground. My sorrow will give birth Dear lady, My heart will give back. The pain I must contain, I can never go back. Faith in me has died And Hope only remains. The seed I sow Beneath your skin. Will someday erase the scars from within. To bring forth a rose of great beauty, Before me. For the love I did feel, was all too real. The past has made me hard and ill. My tears are f...
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Flash Fiction / Worship
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The Other Side of Darkness
Was this about missing someone who is no longer in your life, and if so did it cause these feelings that you are having now? Did you ever feel this way before you met this person. They way you come across with this piece is that you are almost trapped inside your own mind, a prisoner trapped within yourself, realizing you will be forever captured, and left to suffer. This piece was very expressive. Good job Jess
Horror / Voices, Ch 2
Man this was really scary. I read the first chapter of this and I couldn't understand why she would kill herself, she was part of a cult. I was watching somthing about cults last night on tv, I believe that these cult leaders have knowledge of psycology and they are using it to hynotize people. This book is really scary I could see it being a movie or somthing. Keep up the good work I want to read more. Jess
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Kandersteg
This was very nice, this could be posted in a travel magazine. I thought maybe it should be longer though. blessings, Jess
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