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AGE:
16
LOC: Ireland
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 27
LOC: Ireland
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 27
salutations…..well it seems rather pathetic to try and condense a lifetime of character down to a short few paragraphs but i shall try for the benefit of those who actually want to know, but for those who don’t…stop reading now!
ok…i am essentially a girl who enjoys life and despises those who don’t without due cause.I write mostly poetry and occasionaly short stories,songs and plays.I always work as hard as i can on each of my pieces, not doing so i think is a waste of time!!
p.s. i live in ireland and hope you have a nice day
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Poetry word by word a poet builds these things from lint and dust and an original idea might be hiding somewhere, lurking. A friend to those who are friend to it, the twists and turns, the tiger pit. Your scared of it though its smaller than you, just because its complex doesn't mean it doesn't have feelings to. A corner, a refuge. something it shouldn't be.these things of great beauty deserve to fly free. confinement to words such as sibilants and such, what kind of life is that, those thin...
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He said that he’d love her if she gave herself to him. Said he would love her but first she must sin. Said that he meant it but oh how he lied and when her innocence he’d taken oh how she cried. Forever awakened to how bleak life could be she just sat all alone with the gun at her feet. Gun in her mouth only metal could she taste not a thought did she give to this terrible waste. When they found her they tutted as they noted her age. A girl of 15, blue eyes but no face. Funeral, somber, he ha...
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He waits and he watches until I’m all alone. Why do you do it is what I want to know, Why do hate me..what did I do? I hate what its made me but still love you the same, Alone you’re a beast but in public your tame. I hate myself but should I instead hate you? Would that make you happy or is my end coming soon. I told another and wish I had not, I don’t want you to be in trouble, don’t want you to get caught. Do you know that I still love you? Is that what you want.. What am I to you? A siste...
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You just keep on knocking and I’ll continue not caring. I glance at the clock then down at the ceiling. I’m not upside down so don’t you dare say I am. I’m just hanging here in need of a friend. I needed encouragement they gave me rope. I did what I thought would please them the most. They gave me a lifetime of life yet unlived. So I gave them a son who they may never kiss. Say that I’m selfish, I know that I am but please don’t mention that this is a sin. Running is tiring and walking a bor...
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It makes me happy to see you sad, i bet you wish i'd beleived it was dead. You lied and lied, thought i'd never know,well guess what......i do. Its gone and its not coming back no matter how much you cry, if only you could live and let die. You told me everything, or so i thought. You told me nothing and thats the only truth. The laughter at how pathetic you are warms my heart, but you taking my only other friends tears in half. I'm not gonna care if you turn around when you see me, not gonna...
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I'm not quite sure what your trying to get at here. You obviously need alot more practice but the structure and rhyming scheme do work well
What can i say..Awww!! this is so sweet! i love it! you have serious talent and this should definately be published. No criticism cause this is perfect!
I really like how this poem has me asking questions until the very last line when it ties everything together perfectly, it is a really cleverly put togrther poem. The subject matter quite reputable and your lanusge is fantastic. I have no actual critique just a well done..= )
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