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AGE:
52
LOC: Westminster, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 09
LOC: Westminster, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 09
I’ve been writing short stories and poety since I was in grammar school. My goal has always been to get published. I’ve recently been taking some writing courses online from my local community college, and I’m hoping they help me grow as a writer.
I love to write and love to read. I can take criticism (just turn the other way while I grimace). Just kidding! We don’t grow as creative people if we don’t welcome and accept criticism.
I am glad to be a member of this community.
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If everything went as I planned My life would be better than grand But plans go astray It seems, everyday My bet is you know that firsthand
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I'd wait for you forever, 'til my life comes to an end. But you set rules and boundaries and just refuse to bend. I hate the one who loved you first so very long ago for leaving you with such a thirst that taints love you could know. You're locked in time and now you play a game of hide-and-seek, portray a strong and caring man but in a way, you're weak. Don't base your life on things before Just use them as a guide. Let feelings flow and fears dissolve Just open up inside. So many times I've...
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Night falls; I can't sleep - one thought after another. I need an off switch.
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Night falls; I can't sleep - one thought after another. I need an off switch.
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I'm typing with an urgency for more; our role-play just exploded on the screen Explicit words I simply can't ignore ... He wrote, "you should expect what's unforeseen" He's Dom tonight (he plays that role so well) I am his sub, no question do I ask Between keystrokes my fingers seem to dwell Upon my thigh in keeping with my task The minutes pass, there are no words from him I type, "where are you?", one time ... three, and four I feel the chance to finish might be slim Then suddenly, there's ...
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Go ahead and finish this piece. I think you've started something decent. The only comment is you use the phrase "my dear" twice in the first stanza. I would take one of them out since it doesn't sound as natural as it could.
A limerick, by definition, is supposed to be only five lines, in an a-a-b-b-a rhyming pattern. You should reclassify this as a poem. I think the subject about which you are writing is very cute. The concept is good, but your rhythm should flow a little more smoothly.
I really like this. But I wonder - why did she kill herself? Why was he going to kill him and why did she change her mind? I also like how you portray your mother. Nice feeling in this poem. Good imagery. Keep up the good work!
I think you totally accomplished what you set out to do. Your descriptions are perfect. I could actually see what you were writing about, thinking about the last rainy day and how the rain drops did exactly what you described. An excellent piece.
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