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AGE: 29
LOC: Houtzdale, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 03

I’m just a simple, 20-something mother and wife looking for honest opinions and willing to learn all I can. I’ve always had a soft spot for romantic literature and I dabble in poetry.

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Romance / Prologue to "Fate"
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“The National Weather Service has issued a severe winter storm warning for Blair, Cambria, Centre, Clearfield, and Jefferson Counties. Expect high winds and accumulations of twelve to sixteen inches in the northern counties. Please take care while traveling . . . ” Elizabeth turned off the radio and sat back nervously in her seat. The snow was coming at the windshield looking like they were taveling warped speed on the 'Starship Enterprise'. She looked over at her husband, Daniel, who was dri...
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If you seek me out and my body is not there, Search for me in your dreams. If you call to me and I do not answer, Call to me in your dreams. If you still love me and it is not returned, I'll love you eternally in your dreams. If you need my comfort and my arms no longer reach, I will hold you always in your dreams. If your soul becomes too weary and you can no longer rest alone, I will come for you in your dreams.
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Romance / "Fate" Chapter 1
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Chapter 1 Elizabeth White woke in a cold sweat and sat straight up in her bed. She sighed heavily as she got her bearings and lay back against her sweat moistened pillow. Another nightmare, that was the third one this week. Elizabeth threw the covers back and swung her feet over the edge of her bed. After slipping into her house shoes, she ambled into the kitchen to heat some water for her morning tea. As she waited for the water to heat, she stood at the kitchen counter, her head resting in ...
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Romance / Prologue to "Fate"
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“The National Weather Service has issued a severe winter storm warning for Blair, Cambria, Centre, Clearfield, and Jefferson Counties. Expect high winds and accumulations of twelve to sixteen inches in the northern counties. Please take care while traveling . . . ” Elizabeth turned off the radio and sat back nervously in her seat. The snow was coming at the windshield like a scene from Star Wars . She looked over at her husband, Daniel, who was driving like a maniac to beat the storm home. “P...
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Romance / The Old Oak Tree
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Chapter 1 of my fantasy story
Quite honestly, this piece was difficult for me to read. The flow of writing is clipped off and broken as I read it. For a first chapter, it doesn't grab my attention the way I'd expect a novel to. The first chapter of a novel will make a person continue to flip pages, or toss the book aside. Setting the mood in the town or of a particular character often helps in smoothing out the reading. Best of luck to you!
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Colder than a well-digger's ass?? Gotta love that! I'm not so good at reviews, but I'm full of opinions! I like this little story. It made me chuckle. If I might make a suggestion, perhaps you could combine the aggrivation of her computer not working properly with her anticipation of reading her reviews, and make it much more emtional. The daughter giving her support makes the story that much better!
I was a bartender for three years. I can honestly say this sounds exactly like a typical night at work! Normal conversation and the one idiot with beer muscles!
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