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AGE: 19
LOC: Cheyenne, WY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 27

Hi. Do you remember all those poems and sayings attributed to “Anonymous”? Yeah, nuff said.

A career as a writer would be nice… sit around and think all day, crank out a few poems, work on that new novel… that would be great.

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Flash Fiction / Stillframe of Middle Age
Version 2
9 Reviews   1 Comment
     Brian took a deep breath. He glanced longingly out the window of his badly aging office on Main Street as the world turned around him, then looked back to his work. He could never go back.
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Poetry / Lines on a Page
Version 2
1 Review   0 Comments
Lines on a page, written by my hand, do nothing but look pretty, and sound pretty too. Meaning is where you look for it, words say what you want. An empty carton for your sorrows is best filled with flowers. Be mine to entertain. Be mine to show the way. Be mine to enjoy. Be mine so I can be yours. Poems are as dust in wind: thrown out to the world-- then swept away-- going places before settling. I can write for love. I can write for hate. Humor comes, too, and also tragedy. What is st...
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Flash Fiction / Stillframe of Middle Age
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
     Brian took a deep breath. He glanced longingly out the window of his old office on Main Street as the world turned around him, then back to his work. He could never go back.
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Lyrics / Paper Rose
Version 2
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I didn't know what was going on, I didn't know what to feel. I'm not sure I understand it now, I only know that it's real.   I'll take you under my wing And we'll fly, fly away I'll take you under my wing And we'll fly, fly away   All the world is resting on the fate of a paper rose.   Somethin says that I've been here before Somethin aint quite right From the moment that I knocked on her door From when I saw her last night   I'll take you under my wing And we'll fly, fly...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Dreams
Version 1
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    I know a lot of people who think they are trapped into doing just one thing. They had dreams. When I try to find a way for them to acheive their dreams, they get very uncomfortable. I have a hard time relating to people that give up. They say things like: "I want to do this one thing, but I can't". Because then I show them how to make it work and they tell me to fuck off because they've already given up and don't want to hope. What do you have left if you have no ...
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Poetry / Different World
Sounds like a story of wasted youth. Maybe a complaint about how society is in decline. Mechanically it flows pretty nicely, minus a couple lines that are a little too long to read nicely. Some punctuation at the end of some lines might enhance the whole. The one lonesome question mark could use a few friends in that stanza, some lines could use a comma (lines 5, 7, 10, 17, 19, 21, 23) and other might benefit from a period (lines 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, 12, and so on like that). Good work. Gives a rea...
Flash Fiction / Samaritan (version 3)
It seems pretty well put together. Great dialog. Very clear image, easy to read. The topic is a little overdone though.
Poetry / Tell Me, Plain
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Poetry / Compulsion
I love the imagery in this. It paints a very complete picture with relatively few words. It has a natural flow to it, which works well. It's hard to articulate a poem so that it flows well for a reader without a specific structure to it. I would suggest dropping in a few more commas. Just to make it read better. After line six and line fourteen would be where I'd put them.
That's great. Starts out sounding fairly serious, then slowly builds up to the ultimate conclusion. It addresses several serious problems with the government and makes fun of it all at the same time. Can you get any more of these wondrous fuel converters? I know an office downtown that would love one. In any case, well developed writing. A few things stood out to me, but I'm sure they were intentional. "wreck less" took a second to process. "Eve" would seem to refer to Eden, I never found a ...
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