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AGE:
26
LOC: Huntington, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 08
LOC: Huntington, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 08
“The light at the end of the tunnel you promised me has extinguished, and now I’m left in the dark, stumbling along the tracks. I can’t wait for the train.”
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I walk into my local Chinese food restaurant on my way home from work. I can already feel a pimple forming on my forehead. I mean, the air seems to have weight, and god knows it has odor. It’s like a floating film that attaches itself to you soon as you walk thru the entrance. Bubbling carbohydrates, vitamin drained vegetables are swimming in a stir-fry whirlpool of garlic, scallions, and starch. Genetically altered pieces of meat, injected with government-regulated chemicals are swimming in...
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Quite simply there still lives in me an irresistible urge to call you at times, a mad dash if you will. Try to imagine me lying in bed, and at times still rolling over in a half wakened state believing you might be there. Amputees have described such a situation and it is known as a Ghost limb. Yet, after time these moments would pass and I find myself saying phrases like "I'm over it." Now I know you said, "What could there have been to get over." These words careless and reckless, did send...
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Within my shackles of loneliness, I find myself a home, And torture within these shackles cold, a world I call my own. They cut my wrist and force my fist to beat a pone my soul, And delve me deep, where daemons weep, in a straight jacket I have sown. So stranded lay, and empty pay, my life hangs on a whim, Like in the womb that held to soon a light once bright now dim. I have a smile; I wear it less, with every rise of summer sun, I cannot find without a chilling breeze, a happy thought but ...
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Time and time again to cry, Into my darken plight I pry, and lift my glass to feel subdued, drown away my murky mood, Sit within the dark confines, Of a room surreal sublime, Where I sit alone with glass, And wish my time would quickly pass, From out this hell I call regret, And prey to hell to settle my debt, Leave behind the mistakes of my Father, And indulge in a state where I dare not Bother, Yet with each sip my soul evokes a haunting coax, Where words begin to reel my feelings, And tat...
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The sun hadn’t quite set that evening on the harbor; it hadn’t yet fallen below the choppy horizon that would soon become my grave. My ass was hanging on the edge of a peer with a pistol snug in my chest. The beautiful girl holding the paperweight-sized piece of steel within the vicinity of my heart was Madeline Waverly, or at least that’s what she told me her name was. She was fucking ravishing to behold on any night, but tonight was a particular site to take in. Her eye’s are dark, but not...
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It intresting, but I wonder where you would go with it. i mean, normally a book written from a dogs point of view would be for children, but you have written it for adults. I mean, are these altered dogs, or our we lead to beleive that dogs are smarter than we think and keep it from us. this by the way, is a theme you will find in Disney movies. I think you should thinkof your audience. Dog suicides are not appropriate for children, but honestly I do no think this story would appeal to most a...
I found it to be very cute. I like the rythym and enjoyed how you wraped it up "indeed."
I liked this poem, and my only rgret is that it wasn't longer. I feel there is more that you can add to it. I am sure that it would be hard to re-visit your state of mind at the time, but I think this would be better if you said a little more. Describe the pain, the agony of love if you will. Also, I think some lines need comma's i.e, "Forget if you can, or repent if you must" plus, did you mean "repent it?" Anyway, great work, if you ever re-write, let me know~
This was such a delight. I found it innocent, sensual, and above all, very well written. Your images, of soft palms, playful hands, was perfect. The words, essence, and consumption are infact, what I feel is the equation for sex, or shall I call it love making. I think the situation you are describing is love making. Your words came across very gentle, and I think that helps compliments the moment you are trying to describe as well~ Bravo~I'm jelous~LOL
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O.K>, again, this is sexual, and I find myself getting a bit steamy when reading it.LOL Have you ver considered writing a romance, or one of those sultry sex novels for middle aged secretarys. ( this is not an insult) The images in this one were great. the "salty sweat," the "heated flush," it's like being there, which is great pplace to be.
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