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LAST LOGIN: June 28
LAST LOGIN: June 28
Hey. My name is Shawn and I’m 16 years old and love to empty out my thoughts on paper whenever I can. Well I hope you giv me honest feedback on my writing. If you want to chat with me on AIM ,my sn is AsHeartsGoFaded.
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Upon this night I will stay in your grace. Untouched by fear and discomfort. And everything that harms me will render me and flee. And I'll be holding onto every moment I have with you and I'll charish this well as you hold me sound so deeply and tightly bound in your arms tonight. So lets go and chase some stars. They can take us to a place where we would want to stay alone. And the night will be all ours. And you can kiss me hard so that it'll be all night before it fades away. I'll live in...
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It's what all have come to fear and when its here we shutter ourselves from the ones we loved. Its hard for us to breathe and we begin to lead ourselves away from the ones we loved. And we know their hearts will bleed but our hearts will be freed from the ones we loved. And we become the hated who are "heartless" and who decieved. And all eyes are watching us for a reason to believe that the words they said were truth and we're really who they say. We're hated and we're "heartless" so we are ...
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I bask in the taste staind upon my lips that you give me from your goodnight kiss, and I breathe air deeply into my lungs to savor the moment. And as your hands slip from my face, I wrap my arms around your waist in one last attempt to keep you near. Then the moment arrives that I've come to fear, a goodnight you whisper in my ear means another nightly sad surrender of you my love. And when I'm on my way back home I find it hard to be alone and realize that without you, I feel as though I'm n...
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I'm lying in my bed. The stars look bright tonight. I want to be up there. I want to breathe that air. Because being down here just doesn't seem right. And as I breathe the air between two stars they pull me in and I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone. But for you I will leave a kiss upon the sky and you can take it if you want. But if you dont thats fine. I can care less because I'm gone. How long has it been since I've been up there? How long has it been since I've had no fear? "There the...
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So latley it seems as though I've been away and you're missing out on me. And lately it seems as though you've been holding out on saying anything. And I've been reading you and I realize that you're insecure with everything that you've got and tonight I'll see you and I'll hold you all night long. And I'll sing you to sleep with a lullaby. "La la da dee dum" I'm sorry for not comming to you first when I knew I had the chance. And sorry for ever giving you doubts for ever sharing trust with m...
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Good job mike. I really mean it. I'm so glad to actually have someone on this site thats consistantly good. Im not just saying it either. This one was very well written and had a strong theme. I loved it.
This was good. It had a strong theme. It didnt however have too strong of a "flow" but it was still good to read.
This was good and it kept a good flow to it. It could have been a littlr stronger though, but all in all, it was good.
This was good and I liked the theme and the style of it. It did stay kind of short of going into much detail. You could have put more emotions into it, but other then that it was good.
This was well writen and I like the style. It was dramatic, but the topic was a hard topic to not be dramatic about, but i liked it. I however dont really agree with calling someone a "twisted fuck" and right after saying you hope God forgives them. Just kind of hipocritical if you know what I mean. But it was a good read and it was pretty strong. Good job.
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