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AGE:
43
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 23
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 23
Picture this …
You are people watching rather than soccer watching. You see a 40 something woman yelling and screaming at the top of her lungs at the game obviously intently watching. Typical, average soccer mom kind of person complete with the appropriate coloring sweatshirt to match that on the bright orange team shirts fluttering by on the field. Hair and eyes hidden well beneath the baseball cap, the whistle blows for half time. The woman drops back down to the lounging lawn chair picks up a notebook and frantically starts writing never hearing or noticing anything around her. Like she is lost in some fantasy world found on the blank lines of the paper, dropping the notebook as soon as the whistle blows back to the bag.
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Chapter Two Still reeling from the words of my jewels, I felt torn between begging answers to rushing towards the sounds of the approaching horse’s hoofs resounding against the pathway. Rushing forth through the trees to arrive before the visitors appeared. My appearance, to say the least, was nothing short of that of a wild child. The long fiery red hair normally held back by a simple piece of muslin now spews across my face. The muslin shift tied at the waist with muslin knockers covered in...
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Chapter One “The tear in the fabric is your fault. It is because of you, your decisions, and your actions that this battle rages. It is because of you that your precious Frederick is gone. Do you hear me? Your fault. It is not that of either side, but you alone hold responsibility of the fault. Responsibility of the tear.” The resounding echo of the voice sounding so deliberate, so purposeful in nature. “Mine? I mean, I …. But how? What did I do?” “Do not pretend to not know your choices, you...
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“Why is everything always so white in a hospital?” “Not sure, “Jane began, “this place is not that bad with some of the bright colors they have, except that green looks like . . . “stopping short as Michelle’s eyes caught mine looking away quickly. “Yeah,” preoccupied with my own thoughts, what was I going to do? How am I going to be a single mom with three kids? How am I supposed to juggle everything and not have Frank here to lean on? How could this really be happening? Why us? Why now? Fla...
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Save a troubled child, O God. For the waters have risen, and I sink deeper into the murky river where there is no foothold. Save a troubled child, O God. I tire from calling, my eyes grow weary from seeking, and my need is desperate. Save a troubled child, O God. For the waters have risen, don't let me drown, O God, Save a troubled child, O God. O God, hear my cry. Your love redeems all. Save me O God, turn to me and set me free. O God, hear my cry, comfort me, rescue me and keep me safe. Sav...
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It is that time of year when the weather outside is frightful and daydreams begin for the wonderful spring season. This year why not consider an herbal garden, which can be both visually stimulating and aromatically pleasing? Exactly what makes a garden an herbal garden? Herbs are plants that are essentially grown for their unique flavor or aroma. Herbs have played an important part in history from romance to religion to health even to superstition. Some herbs are considered magical whereas ...
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wanting to understand some of the advice you had given in a review of something I wrote, I searched out something of yours. I clearly understand what you are saying about the first paragraph and first page ... You definately captured my attention with the descriptive stage setting. I am curious though about the time switch of reflecting back on the meeting if that was the best way to slip that in. I had to reread a couple of times to understand. An understanding of why Ben did the things he d...
You may have rushed it but what was there was nicely done. I think has the potential to be expanded in between the last two paragraphs. But would take some research in doing the details accuretly of what life was like even if just telling a fictional story of life in the midwest. But the opening and the story plot of it coming from a ghost whom the young man is interacting with could be extremely interesting.
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