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I loved this! I love when you said "When eventide yawns and breaks and sighs A thousand sighs upon these shores," You did a wonderful job!

This is almost like my life right here! I loved this part "the person in front of me only seems to make me go slower i want to yell and scream at the person in front of me for driving so damn slow but instead i turn up the music and sing the song goes on in my head for the rest of the day" That happens to me everyday! I love your work!

I would love to see this as a movie! I loved it when you said. "Yet I am here in the rain with a cigarette to warm me up. Silly idea actually. How can a vampire feel? No blood, no heat nor cold. No feeling, forever. Just the flies." And when you said. "Can you imagine her surprise when I showed her lungs covered in blood and black with ashes? Something that resembles an amused feeling awakens in me. Strong enough to make me smile if only for an instance, since the soulless takes control again...

I loved it! Out of the whole thing this was my favorite! It was so beautifuly ritten I would like to see more of your work! "The boy on the corner not yet grown was me blessed with ingnorance untouched by life’s dusty path clothed in light contrast to my skin letting go of my fathers hand"