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Backwards ways, dust, ground, and leather, hard and sweaty from works laid laze,the eyes the same and paralyzed. So filled, the shape, dips hair back as to rest a resolution and forget the stars, the exhaustion begs a binding breath be release! but goes not granted, and for all he knows not cared. He sits at time and see's nothing pass frozen in what burns life a hole true, in soul black, and wrong song sang. and is awkward. This erratic misconception scares his cultured others, but he see's ...
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The big bang..... described as the most miraculous, momentous event! in all the premordial fires life!!… the only affair of its kind to breath into existance with one expanding breath, to have created such gorgeous magnificence, in its passion it created stars giving birth to more elements, that formed and coalesced into big heaps of rock and dust. after which such love, came worlds, given warmth by the close stars that even in their infancy, birthed worlds close enough together to contact. ...
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very phantasmal and full of advanced metaphor... this gives me chills i love it! but alas i must comment on one line "Denial scabs, clotted disassociation," i see the meaning as in the cause for denial but look at the words 'scab' and 'clotted' after 'skin cells.' i honestly think the variety could be expanded. but still i love the way u write it, i like the last line particularly for the use of power words, they describe with the absents of image... a feat in my book.
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its romantics are very scenic, reminicint of sun set and rich smells. even not described you can still make out a picture, for example 'shaded splendor' might be a tree which is great because it leaves you thinking about what could be the manifested or objective 'shade.' also the ryme is good, basic beat, but the structure is repetitive, i think it fits the rhym so no prob there. id still make it not as strait, though i dont see how. as a chaotic poet i think this in opposition is in good ord...
I am amazed, this is new, and so new I would call you a harvester of new morals, new experiences, and new more powerful and free ways. This is, ‘not so new’ of a philosophy, but go about it and you my friend; will have books of unique persona and action that is far reaching and charismatic. Your revelation is comprehendible and a step forward, and sharing it its very profound and a great gift for open listeners. Recently I read 'thus spake zarathustra' it has similar hints to the inevitable c...
Awesome, surly thick with lunacy yet with simple figurative pitch, going seemingly strait on the course of religious servitude and submission… only to acknowledge its contemptible comedy as it all is said to be a spirit of bliss; to a humorous devastation. The representation of Jesus being an ace of a squadron is seemingly a indication of struggle with a natural ‘sin’ (as well as a comical image) or maybe a consideration of interior possession by the devil or other sin causing being. The fact...
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