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49
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 12
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 12
C.W. Badie, over the past 30+ years, was a musician in the U.S. Marine Corps, a salesman, a customer service agent, and drove a taxi while pursuing his dream of becoming a songwriter. However, on Christmas Day, 1995 he was ‘bitten by the bug’ to write speculative fiction when a story began formulating in his head while waiting for customers at a cabstand. After nearly ten years of teaching himself the craft, he published his first short story, ‘The End of My Drought’, in September 2005 and ‘AKIN: The Manhunter’ in the anthology ‘The Heart of Our Community in May, 2006. He is now working on an anthology of short stories called ‘The Side Street Chronicles’, a dark excursion through the mean streets of mid-21st century Chicago, and a sci-fi…
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FRINGE ETIQUETTE From ‘THE SIDE STREET CHRONICLES’ By C.W. Badie (8,853 words) As a sideline to his security business, Kip worked as a private dick whose specialty was hunting down runaway teens and missing persons. He was good at it and always closed his cases. He found them and returned them to their homes, sometimes afraid or slightly damaged. Sometimes they were so far gone he knew he would soon see them on the Fringe streets again. The cases he hated ended like that, or worse, he found t...
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Something Else By C.W. Badie The room stank of sex, cigarettes, and the cheap pine cleaner they used to scrub it down between uses. Tanner Paige took another drag off his Newport, exhaling the smoke lazily through his mouth and nose. Through the haze, he watched Candy wash away evidence of the urgent sex they had only moments before. Until Candy, Tanner had sworn off hookers though she was only the second woman he had ever paid to have sex with. The first one was all “Hurry up and cum” and wa...
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The story is well done; the characters are thought out and believable, your storyline created great visuals...but... WHERE'S THE HORROR?? Other than a super human show of strength when lincoln broke the cop's arm, I have no idea where horror was...unless you're talking about growing up in the urban streets, then okay, but what kind of horror story is it? I wouldn't know...
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First, I'm going to tell you what's right about it. You have a great story idea here; it moves, you paint a good picture of the world. I was entertained. The problem that diminishes what you have is the grammar and style is a bit sloppy. It is hard enough doing slang or or regional dialects let alone what I am assuming is a foreign accent. You have to be careful when creating a character with an accent...believe it or not, even made up accents have to be clear and understood. The way you wrot...
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