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AGE:
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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 08
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 08
Well, I’m not much, but I’m me. I love writing… and honestly I want it to be my future… I normally write poetry, but soon I’ll be posting parts of the novel I’m working on, and several short stories… you’ll soon see that most of work is just a tiiiiny bit depressing… but thats not like me lol! I guess the reason its mostly sad is because in life I’m one of the happiest people you’ll meet… I guess it’s just how I let my depression out… let it seem from my brain down my arm and leak out of my pen! Hehe… Well, yeah… if you want to get to know me, just send me a message!
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I try not to show it But when I smile I don't feel a thing. I've given up hope, Given up faith, Given up everything. There's a cold hole inside of me, Where its Winter but never Spring. Secrets pile up, lies mix in All I need is peace. This hole is growing bigger, Lies devouring my flesh. I'm sinking ever so slowly No lifeboat to save my wreck. So as I sink in the ocean To the pit of the bottomless sea, My hole drives me to drown In a flood of misery. There's a cold hole inside of me Where it...
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Sweet little child Close your innocent eyes Let slumber serenade you Rest your worrisome mind My sweet little child Sleep under the Darfur moon Let nothing burden your memory Just sleep your way to home Your picture was there for the world to see But the world just passed on by You’ve been brave my little soldier Don’t you start to cry My innocent little child Sleep under the Darfur moon Never again will anything hurt you Just sleep your way to home Sleep under the Darfur moon Sleep your way ...
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With every breath, suffocating dirt is inhaled through nostrils Leaving the feeling of chemical doused cotton in nose And beach sand in throat. As you limp down the gravel road, Your eyes widen, lacking the innocence so rightly yours. Great buildings lay in ruins around you, Some showering the vacant street with sparks. Crumbled lumber lays collapsed among dirt; Nails litter the surrounding area. Gashes trickling blood cover arms and legs, With a large one streaking your forehead. Your hoarse...
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If this were the movies You’d come knocking at my door When I need you most. If this were the movies The other woman would be a thing of your past A fading memory that would never last. If this were the movies We’d always make up And hold each other tight. If only this were the movies…
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Round and round the genocide A pocket full of truth to hide Ashes, ashes Life stands still. The government has sent the janjaweed To plant murders growing seed Ashes, ashes, Lives weakens now. The Reaper upon the rooftop Laughs at victims, and wont stop Ashes, ashes All kneel down. Life’s finale is ringing, The vultures are all singing, Ashes, ashes, All fall down. And they dont get back up.
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Oh wow, this is amazing. And oh so relatable!!!!!! I love the lines: Now where do i turn in your silence? The loneliness hits me with violence I’m trying very hard not to go crazy It’s been a mistake – oops-a-daisy wanted you so badly, I still do It’s inconceivable that we cold be through I rejected others to keep your place Do not throw my faith back in my face there’s still so much to enjoy together Unchartered love and stormy weather (Especially this one!!!!!!) Well not that I look at my f...
Before I begin I just want to say I love the last line. It closed your poem with a punch... Your poem is very relatable... It seems like we've all been through something like this... but you penned it magnificently! Wnderful write!
I couldn't help but laugh when I read this! This truly was a funny, good write! Now I'm looking at my dogs and wondering what they're thiking! Lol... good job!
I can relate to tis..... I really can. My best friend killed herself, and I kept asking myself why didnt i listen to her when she said life can be short? For such a long time afterwards I refused to lauh or even smile. I went from a happy girl, to just another inhabitant in a crowded world. I hope you're okay, and that you find the strength to carry on like I did. But I love this, especially the lines: But the laughter died when God took you from me It lost its immortality Its full of so much...
I realy like this.... The rhyming isn't annyoing or forced like most these days. And its very understandable and relateable. Just... amazing write. I hope to read more of your work!
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