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AGE:
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LOC: Commerce Township, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 31
LOC: Commerce Township, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 31
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She chose to walk alone Though others wonder why Refused to look before her Eyes cast up towards the sky She didn't have companions No need for earthly things She only wanted freedom from What she felt were puppet strings She longed to be a bird That she might fly away She pitied every blade of grass For planted they would stay She longed to be a plane That brightly danced alone Felt jealous of the steam That made the air its only home Some say she wished too hard Some say she wished too long...
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She chose to walk alone Though others wonder why Refused to look before her Eyes cast up towards the sky She didn't have companions No need for earthly things She only wanted freedom from What she felt were puppet strings She longed to be a bird That she might fly away She pitied every blade of grass For planted they would stay She longed to be a plane That brightly danced alone Felt jealous of the steam That made the air its only home Some say she wished too hard Some say she wished too long...
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very powerful and great use of imagery without actually coming out and saying it. it allows the readers to image a few different thing making it a great discussion piece.
wow....relationship from hell is right. you kept me wanting to keep reading and hear more..very impressive.
very interesting....i'm kinda curious to what inspired you to write this. and it does make you want to fly.
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if done right and making sure its historical facts are accurate i see this idea as a very interesting novel
flows very well...very dark through out the whole poem but i like that little bit of hope and joy at the end to lessen the darkness.
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