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LOC: Brick, NJ
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LAST LOGIN: March 26
LOC: Brick, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 26
Me? I like bikes. I’ve been riding for 35 of my 48 years. It’s as much a part of me as my family. I’m a veteran. I never did any shooting but I did my bit. I have a site, you’re all welcome to take a look and please feel free to leave a comment in my blog.The blog is another taste of the MS I’ve written. There’s also a bunch of pictures and vidios to keep you interested for a while.Here’s a link
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=36224790
Enjoy, Neil…AKA…Neil
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Hunting Dinosaurs By Neil Cotter CHAPTER 1 August, 1970 Damn is it hot! Even my cut off shorts felt too hot. I turned and looked at the old battered alarm clock on the nightstand. 9:30. It’s only 9:30 and the place is like an oven already. There was no air conditioning, just some contraption we called an air cooler. Several times a night you cold fill a reservoir on top with cool water that would trickle down over a metal grid and the fan from behind it would cool the air somewhat. It probabl...
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I did 500 miles today To get a cheeseburger with the guys Hell no, I'm not crying It's just something in my eyes Tommy bought cheap goggles It's like everything he buys Now he looks like a raccoon Two black rings around his eyes I got whacked on my scoot "Was it your fault? No lies!" No baby I was good. The cager had closed eyes. Might never ride again Lifelong severed ties No, I'm not crying I think something's in my eyes Lost three friends, that same year, all on different rides. They were ...
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Yeh, that hits the nail square on the head. More so the "poets note" then the poem but they're both good. Stop by , take a ride. Say hi. Neil...AKA...Neil myspace.com/neilakaneil
I thought the piece was entertaining but a little too random.I'm no poet and I understand the medium is subject to allot of interpretation, I just like a beginning, a middle and an end. Don't get me wrong, I think it was good, but for my taste it could have been better with more structure.
Well done! There was a beginning, middle and an end, something I don't see allot in the poems I've been reading. It had bullet proof structure and it flowed like an old song you know all the words to. I know the robin has some metaphorical meaning but I would still love to see something structured like this about everyday things like sitting in a bar, running the kids around, or riding a motorcycle. Those are things I can relate to. But I’m a heathen doomed to off color limericks because most...
Pretty deep stuff. I like the imagery. It even had an odor to it. I couldn't tell if this was an ode to an acquaintance or a way of life. It didn't matter; it worked just as well for one as the other. I would like to series of poems about this character. …Neil
That was fun. I have a son in college and it was kind of like looking at his life through your eyes (that almost sounded like poetry didn’t it?) I think the real test of a good poem is its ability to hold a person like me who may not be a real poetry kind of guy. You did that. Bravo!….Neil
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