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The feeling of your whole body being shattered when you hold something you once loved starts to disappear into the void of death. The gradual deaths of your heart as you see the life of your dearest friend leaving you. The fountains just start and you can not turn them off no matter how hard you close your eyes. His last breathe seems to end your world. At the end it just feels like the world hates you and is doing this just because it can. I will miss you my greatest friend, because you t...
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Short Story / Ocean's Love
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The sand was soft after the spring rain last night. But it was the ferrous beating of the waves on the rocks that called me out that morning. As the sun rose it seemed to dance on top of the jaded green sea. That’s when I spotted her. She was in a torn white dress and hanging on to a piece of wreckage. Without any thought of my own safety I jolted towards her; as I did I took off my shirt and shoes. The waves were trying to hold me back, but I jumped in, as the next wave was about to hi...
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Flash Fiction / Can You See Me
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I came closer to a dark alley that day; I tried to strain my eyes when I looked at the other end towards the other street. But as soon as my footstep started my journey, a child screams at the top of his lungs, “A mysterious figure resides in that alley and if anybody comes near, he asks them a question and if that person refuses to answer him, he will pursue them until they give him an answer.” I looked at the boy with a puzzled look, but as soon as I could ask him what the ques...
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Short Story / Ocean's Love
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The sand was soft after the spring rain, last night. But it was the ferrous beating of the waves on the rocks that called me out that morning. As the sun rose it seemed to dance on top of the jaded green sea. That’s when I spotted her. She was in white and hanging on to a piece of driftwood. With no thought of my own safety I jolted towards her; as I did I took off my shirt and shoes and ran into the sea. The waves were trying to hold me back, but I jumped in, as the next wave was about...
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