AGE:
44
LOC: Arlington, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 25
LOC: Arlington, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 25
Writing is something to be enjoyed just about as much as speaking at times. So I try to be a good listener, having learned from some of the best. I tend to think a lot about life, and all of the things it brings to each person.
My passions include open mic nights,listening to music every day, a bike ride here and there, and helping people see the beauty around them.
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Version 1
10 Reviews
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Todays wanderlust may become Tomorrows epoch.
Version 3
15 Reviews
2 Comments
Following The trails of the earth Removed By veil of darkened night As a witness To an elk below the moon, Peering Under a soft lit hue Through the trees of glaring Feeling The lonesome night unglue At the place An elk, and I, stay out of sight Stepping Beside the marks of man Before Tracing the lines of city lights Recognizable out of doors Parallel Between the shadows, and light Eclipsed In these lunar tides Captivated Since finding a different way through Carrying on As one side, awaits, t...
Version 2
18 Reviews
9 Comments
Following The lines of the earth Casting Their size below the sun Shadows Blend with rolling moonshine Dividing The physics of time with Light carrying an eclipse Connected To both earth, and space, Looking Onto this divided race Drawn As one side of a bridge Spanning The entire night Parallel to another side Bringing The moonlit elk, back its hue Leading As wild creatures often do Foraging Away from human sight Arriving Although captivated since finding A very different way through Hearing ...
Version 6
3 Reviews
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Twisted, tied, and connected To this place, keeping agreements Bound to what has been Witnessed from the beginning. By its plain appearance, First to have been Found, then carved, into Something as true as a stone. Ignored by classical elements Caught by old ideas it is best To move from start, to finish, Askance to either side of the wind. Able to open the tied knots To capture a sudden look, Abstract in the commotion At the shore. Grabbing something of a mask, Before each line, Gets washed ...
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I like this for two reasons: 1-It is like an action shot of psychological intensity, mixed with the harmless meandering of words explained by symbolic references of two separate countenances, one obviously imagined. 2-I respect the originality. Great poem, I love it.
I am impressed by the use of dialogue in this story, written very well. I liked this story a lot. I like all of the various scenes in it, however, I prefer each scene lasting longer, then going to the next scene. But either way, it is very entertaining. I felt the various scenes were only a glimpse of something greater to come? You are a very creative writer, and obviously intelligent. The typos I saw were few, knowing when to use 'to' and 'too' and 'two' were just a couple of them I saw. Pro...
From what I have read, you are not any different from me. Put the differences aside, though. Don't look at people as if they hold a title over you, or a trident to the underworld, look and see that we are all just as fragile as the next guy. From how this sounds, you have gone beyond the average vulnerability people feel, only because you are strong enough to. But don't let the 'idiotic ideas' rule the good person you have become, simply enjoy the learning experience this life you have can of...
You have done a great job of writing. A story like this is an inspiration, because hope lives by each of us believing in the goodwill surrounding others. I admire the love you have for your father, and know that he loves you. I recently heard a recording artist named "Seal" say, "that we grow by our relationships, the ones we love helping us to grow the most." As you grow, you will understand more of yourself, and that will show you more every day of the love your father has for you. You must...
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