BabySetsFire's profile

AGE: 25
LOC: Cincinnati, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 04

I’ve mainly joined Urbis because I am in need of a source to provide unbiased yet constructive criticism, to help me improve and polish my writing.

Most of the works I will be posting will be rough drafts with little attention focused upon grammar mistakes. My main focuses are to keep my story detailed and flowing, though the mistakes will be taken care of with later revision.

I consider being able to read the work of other creative minds here an added bonus, yet I can sometimes be picky on the type of story I like. If reviewing a story, I discover I have nothing good to say about it, I say nothing at all; so those who I do write up reviews for, I truely did enjoy your work.

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Version 1

8 Reviews 3 Comments

“Dead body?” My tongue seemed to linger upon the two words, heavy, they rolled slowly off and into the air sounding rather dumb to my own ears. My eyes were a mirror of Matt's, glimmering green and widened in shock as I looked at him. The thought of such a thing, a body, dead, laying upon my bed was almost too much to bear. “What have you done, Lina?” Tad croaked out, apparently his own throat had tightened. He was using my name an awfully lot lately. The two of them stared at me, expecting ...

Novel Treatments - Overall

Version 1

12 Reviews 5 Comments

It was a lovely, quite enchanting fall evening. The air was crisp, cool and spiced up with the faint trace of toxic city smog, refreshing. The sky was clear, stars twinkling above with a full moon to offer it's soft white glow to the dull concrete smothering the earth. Steel high rises loomed out of the smothered ground, their yellow and white glowing windows peering down upon us mere mortals with hostility. I was walking home from work in the most uncomfortable pair of heels ever invented, ...

Novel Treatments - Overall