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AGE:
45
LOC: Tucson, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 08
LOC: Tucson, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 08
I’m not the average bear.
I’m just me.
Who am I…hmmmm…my name is Judi, I am 43, and a single mom to a 10 yr old son, and twin year old sons. I write because I have to. I am not fool enough to think all I write is genius or wonderful or even good. I write because if I did not, I would implode.
For me, writing communicates. It heals. It is.
I have a small chapbook out, which can be ordered online, from Palace Poets. I’m poet # XXIV (24)
Let’s talk words, shall we?
Yahoo: bambipurr
AIM: BambiPurrs or BamBiPurr
myspace: Bambipurr’s MySpace
Website: Welcome To J…
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You weasel your way in, every time I turn around. You can’t let me recover, when another one is down. Two years now, you’ve lived with me, everyone of them now gone… Did I offer you my living room, or invite you to my home? You’ve become so blatant, you don’t knock anymore… you just come on over and breeze casually through my door. Did I leave the light on? Did I greet death welcomingly? When death takes a holiday, it come...
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Intertwined, we lie together softly lips on lips suddenly your passion flares you claim my lips, nibbling, nipping, needing with crushing, heady fierceness you take me eagerly so engrossed you didn't realize the tigress you've uncaged upward, my glance travels to yours blazing blue to flaming hazel the gleaming shine you cannot place the purring low within my breast you haven't heard before too late it dawns upon your senses the tigress you've uncaged wild tongue trailing down carressing neck...
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In the Land of Needledee where pretty posies sway, the mice say, "Tweedledee" and run and play all day. This land holds promise for rabbits and mice: plenty of fields to invite and delight. Timothy hay, sweet clover, tart grass... they learn all these things in their once-a-day class. Rope-skipping mice, badmitton and ball - there's something for everyone, enjoyment for all! Pampered and spoiled on pillows of silk, eating sardines and big bowls of milk. At night they tumble into their beds, t...
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Flashing bolts slice through the night windswept drops blown on sill shimmering in candle's glow. Flashing eyes burn through the dark lashes swept, glistening sweat shimmering in candle's glow. Electric currents arcs, alights on landscape's curves carressed tonight smell of heat in shadowed glances. Electric shivers hands alight on softened curves carressed tonight smell of love in shadowed glances. Moaning winds straining gusts crashing wetly thoroughly pounds quaking, shaking hallowed groun...
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You weasel your way in, every time I turn around. You can't let me recover, when another one is down. Two years now, you've lived with me, everyone of them now gone... Did I offer you my living room, or invite you to my home? You've become so blatant, you don't knock anymore... you just come on over and breeze casually through my door. Did I leave the light on? Did I greet death welcomingly? When death takes a holiday, it comes visiting me. Why don't you set up house here? I can charge you ro...
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I so agree, verse nowadays leaves one disjointed and in a daze! No need to learn how to create all the freeforms are what rate. Superb imploring in this piece writing like this one cannot fleece A star I give you, quite the song you should be published in the beyond! Perhaps splitting the first 'stanza' into two, to make it more equal in length to the second one, creating three instead is about all I can say in criticism. Great job
His eyes roamed over her tits and abs.,, Argg! Things were interesting until I read that T word...in this story, breasts seem much better than tits He stared at her intently, wandering if what she was saying was true. (you mean wOndering, yes?) Overall, it was arousing and kept interest, but I hope it gets more detailed and explanatory
Words or phrases in all capitals are the ones I fixed or it seemed what was what you were meaning: Her golden locks TORE as he pulled her upright on the chair... ...a bottle of whisky he’d acquired from a DRAWER in the steel table ... ...the way he moved, SILENTLY across the floor,... ‘I may be the daughter of nothing, but I will die with my CONSCIENCE.’ Aside from the grammatical errors I found above, I liked the snippet I read. Good plot twist on having the father and daughter whacking each...
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