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AGE:
22
LOC: Saint Petersburg, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 23
LOC: Saint Petersburg, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 23
“Me”
I am me,
I am nothing but,
The persona of my creativity,
The result of my delusional genius,
Aftermath of licentious years,
Reckless abandonment of youth and intellect,
An interlude intertwining passionate dreams,
Embodiment of infinite fantasy,
I am what I want to see,
A reflection of definitive imagery,
Extension of one’s heresy,
Conflicting ideas and constant hypocrisy,
I am not blind to what I am,
For you will find a little of me in everybody,
A little of everybody in me,
I am a lover, a hypocrite and a liar,
Harsh honesty and brutal reality,
Yet I live in constant fantasy,
A fabrication of originality and vagary,
I am the Christian and the sinner,
I do not wish to be anyone else,
Nor shall I impose my li…
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Version 1
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My eyes were for looking into yours, Take them, I don't need them now, My lips, To press softly against your own, Take them, They are of no use to me, My hands, To roam your silky skin, Take them, They are not mine, My legs, To walk through hell for you, Take them, For I have no soul, My voice, To whisper into your ears, May the words echo in your head, For I will never get to say them to you again, My ears, To listen to your heart beat, Have them, For I shall never rest upon your chest, My h...
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A single moment in time eclipsed by the shadow of doubt, A gray blanket draped over exulting feelings of love, Hazy covering which diminishes a once brilliant spirit, Allowing minute rays of hope to crawl out of moth holes in its melancholy fibers; Its structure slowly smothering swelling senses of seduction, Engulfing euphoric entities while easily ending excitement with evasive elegance, Illusive illusions of undying happiness creeping and dancing about my enigmatic mind, Shall I surely sur...
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The arrow of love has pierced my soul, Steadily seeping poison from it's passionate tip deep down into the marrow of my desire; Allowing the venom that is obsession to creep into my heart, Infesting my emotions, Clouding my judgment, eluding my senses, A puppeteer of synapses, Losing my path due to lust; Loosely losing control of limber limbs, Allowing hands to roam wondrously, Caressing the flowers petals, tasting its intoxicating nectar, Roaming eyes gazing on bountiful hills; Slowly waking...
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Version 1
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This is Marshal Law, Iron boots of oppression pound the desolate streets, Making void the once bustling sound of freedom, The voices of kids laughing in the moonlight, Now is just an echo, Replaced by the shots of domestication, Ringing from the same barrels that once shouted for freedom, The hollow shells drop leaving in their wake a hollow trail, Gunpowder soaks up the tears shed by liberties children, They see them as "terrorists" fighting for a lost cause, We see them as freedom fighters,...
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I do think the additional stanza does add a little to it's ability to capture your mind.
I enjoyed the way you were able to convey such strong emotion in such a simple piece. Short...yet it lingers in my head after I read it. I like when the piece is able to captivate me and jerk me where it wants to. This does that. I couldn't find any technical errors...I am not the best with that though. I do think this is a good piece that many will be able to enjoy.
Sometimes I feel love is a waltz. I really enjoyed the imagery of this poem. i saw perhaps duel images. On one hand I saw the couple dancing....literally..in a room lights sparkling..holding eachother closely. On the other hand I saw it as the evolution of love. Starts out kind of awkward...who leads who. Kind of an uncertainty. I think this poem was a very easy read and quite enjoyable also. I didn't find any grammatical errors and I feel this poem is ready as is. With the duel senses I got ...
This is a really simple poem. However the message was not....it is something that could only be learned through growth and wisdom. I was a little confused at a particular part though."Just yesterday I gay coy looks."--maybe I am just reading it wrong or just don't understand the other meanings of gay....but I see it as Just yesterday I happy coy looks...? Please help me on that line. "is a state of mind. "---I think the i in is should be capitalized. "It’s time for me to be more than blue eye...
I think this is a very interesting piece. It kind of attacks the synapse and gets your brain kicking in. It is always excellent when anything can do that. I like the struggle it showed both physically and spiritually. I am assuming the narrator wasn't quite sure of god at first but then kind of gave in. I enjoyed the basic structure. Made it very easy to concentrate on the topic at hand. As are most pieces involving religion this poem will be able to be the topic of many debates. That is the ...
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