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LOC: Saint Vincent and the Grenadines
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 19
LOC: Saint Vincent and the Grenadines
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 19
Hello all! I love to write, that’s what I do better than anything else. I am inspired by everything and anything around me.
I aspire to become a great writer, hopefully you guys can help me by reviewing my work and telling me what I can improve on
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...im stuck. ...sticking, like super glue My eyes stuck on the blank page. My mind stuck on nothing Swarms of letters, words, sentences and thoughts spin around in the indefinite space of my mind To unjuggle them would prove a great task, so until then i am stuck stuck... sticking... Stuck, trying to figure out... what adhesive is this that prevents the flow of words from my head! What kind of glue that stops the ...? I'm stuck again! I'm sticking. Sticking, sticking...i can think straig...
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Trying to remain sane in a world riddled with sinister dominators pushing their unfair rulings on my pure world perpetual coercing, teasing me with evil eyes evil tactics up there long sleeves continually trying to get me to fail, to fall, to become just like them When can I be free to live without degrading eyes gawking back when can I shout and sing praises without those dictators shrugging, misunderstanding my world, casting it off as a fantasy No, not a fantasy -my reality. Where purity ...
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I want for love. NO not that love. Not that good old boring traditional type love. I yearn for the creative, false love. You know- the beautiful girl meets the handsome eyes five feet across the room, only it feels like two inches apart. Lustful infatuation buries them together. Their seemed complications all simple, their behind the scenes life left to undying imaginations. It inspires me more… Then the music swells, high and hard breaking my filled hart, then strange tears...
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Compliments to the chef.... that 'cellulite delight' was amazing, yum!
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I'm sick and tired of being sick and tired.
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I definitely get the feeling that the girl in the poem is troubled and depresed because apparently no one knows what she is going through and she is basically misunderstood. What i get from the poem, is that the relationship with her father is the source of her discomfort. There are some parts that were not clear and I had to read over a few times but the way it is written, evokes a lot of emotion, after reading it I wanted to reach out and help this girl. If that is what you were trying to a...
This was a great read and had my attention from the begining right through to the end. I enjoyed the flow of the story the way it stared out as a man on a journey, then turned into a man possibly being hunted by hitmen. The introduction of the blonde added slight humour (in my opinion)to the whole scenario. overall a great action packed first chapter, looking forward to more
It's simple, brief and it has a realistic sort of meloncholy tone. I'm sure a lot of workers have said this, with the economic crisis and all.
This is great. When i read this the image of a passionate writer at his keyboard, ramen noodles in hand. Not quite sure if that's the image you were trying to inspire, but i like that any poet can identify themselves with what you wrote.
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