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AGE: 19
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
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Oh what powers does it hold, In it's petals soft and bold, The rose, it's beauty, unconfined, Branching out to bloom in mind. Subtle heartbeats, blushing cheeks, Pounding rhythms, nothing speaks, Just the softness of the flower, Mortal life, undying power. Love and friendship, grief and pain, Everything in our domain, Summed up with a single seed, That blooms to fill our silent need. Graceful beauty, thorns of wrath, Everything upon love's path, Found inside a single bloom, The sweetest smell...
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Poetry / Dragon Love
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Wandering, wandering around and around With no glimpse of anyone in sight All I see is charbroiled bones and burnt down homes As day turns into night Then the funk of death permeates the air As ashes fall from the sky And loud noises are heard getting closer and closer As the dragons prepare to fly Larger than buildings and more fierce than lightning The ultimate predator has been created Once a predator myself, I'm now the prey And all hope has long since faded Now with all hope gone and dra...
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Poetry / Dedicated
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A Poem's kiss Flows from my pen To your heart Lingering, longing As a silent embrace Though we're apart Our words touch As lips, softly searching Verses thrill the soul Separation of One In lonely sky blue Until we are whole Sorrows in stanzas Writ with abundance As tears frozen in time Deep and lonely 'Til ocean is river And you become mine Whose gift this is you cannot know. My heart is in your keeping though. You will not mind my writing here To tell you that I love you so. I know that you...
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Poetry / In The Universe
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In the universe, the world exists as a place Serving as a stage for the flawed human race But a world can also be a time Though your definition of world can be different from that of mine Becaust I think high school itself is a while different world Separated no longer, boys with boys or girls with girls It is a world where innocence is left behind With the crayons and the cartoons in the depths of time It is a world that exists for only four years Filled with joy, filled with paoin, with lau...
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A young female of 16 stands on her balcony of the enormous house behind her. She wears a long white dress with red designs around it, a read embrodery, a read rope around her waist and tied to leave the rest blowing in the soft wind. The back of this dress was bare and cut down low, only three strings of read hold it around her small figure. Odd tatoos on her left shoulder and her back are clearly visable. And what sticks out the most from her clothing is a black chocker about her neck. Her e...
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Poetry / the girl
Congrats, you are the first person I have given a 10 at all to. This not being because you are a friend either. This poem is simple and easy to understand rather than those poems filled with endly babble where the reader gets lost. Good job!
Novel Treatments / Way South: Chapter 2
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Poetry / the next time
I'm sure any person can relate to this poem, which by the way, I do like. Its already been said, but I shall say it again: you just need to do really proof read it and fix some grammar errors. Also a few changes in words could help it flow a bit better. Other than that, the subject of this piece was good and well relatable for the readers.
Poetry / Untitled 1
My my, someone is hurt and expressing it very well. Although I do would like to see more happy pieces than down and sad, I do like this one since I can relate to such pain. Good job!
Poetry / Teardrop
I'm for one tired of the sadness constantly being put into this world, I believe we need more happy events. Although the feelings and thoughts put into this is good and coming through, my personal taste is not appealed here.
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