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LOC: Denmark
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LOC: Denmark
GEN: Female
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The Grand Escape to intense presence.
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Black flower flourishing cracking, shifting, shattering in what once was a heart wonder and want so briefly known the Gardener of small growths and buds in shadows bad seeds planted poison gushing and rot results never again now long forgotten
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Black flower flourishing cracking, shifting, shattering in what once was a heart wonder and want so briefly known the Gardener of small growths and buds in shadows bad seeds planted poison gushing and rot results never again now long forgotten
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Know how you feel:-) Actually I think it would help it, if you skipped 'my'. That would tighten it! Love B
Love it!! Feel the same way, thanks for putting it into words. Brilliant. Love B
Great!! I know exactly what you mean:-) Thanks for putting it into words. Love it! Love B
I really like it. It would be a great beginning of a novel. But why the change to present time in the last part: '12 years later after primary school , a man called Doctor will ask me to open my mouth and look at my teeth and will decide how old i am .' Stay in the past tense. Love B
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