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AGE: 22
LOC: Rochester, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 09

I am young poet, a song writer i take a lot of my inspiration from Bob Dylan and Bob Marley. I also write short stories and i find my self influenced by Mario Puzo Richard Wright and a lot of my own experience and people around me. Since i am really into history and language  i write a lot. right now i am trying to write some poetry and some lyrics to wake up and encourage the youth… all
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its dark as hell on this balmy summer night. Some these worthless street people stalking and trying to start some trouble with some working class people. Fuck i can't stand this shit every other day this bastard is trying to kick me out of my mothers apartment.   yo Harry I am scared to go to sleep i keep dreaming I'll become one of these funky street walking no bodies.I got to get out of this shithole, its killing me, i don't want to stay in this two bit ran down city no more. there go...
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once again in the place to be it Special T iam a swell fellow and still polite like walter conkrite uncomprimising non bias, ill bring you the news like mister Ed R. Morrow no spin no fluff no propaganda just truth. I ve got no alterier motives. i dont work for no political party not the right or the left i work for whats right "Terry whats that" the truth like i ve been doing my whole life. Both sides of the story are going to be told and discussed weight t...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / be our refuge
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How precious is your love and kindness that the children of men take refuge in the shadow of your wings. shun evil& do good, seek peace and pursue it. psalms 34:15 Sur m'Ra v'Asah tov, Bekosh Shalom v'Radfeihu.
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this is me and all of me all i have and i've know i know enough to know that i know not much. yet i say power to the people power to the poor and power to the widow power to the orphan power to the stranger power to the people. G-d o my G-d whatch over them all, shower them with your love. Let my hand be the hand that feeds them let my house be were they find shelter because waiting for heaven to come by twirling my thumbs doesnt help any one the sages say to bring tikkun olam and hasten the ...
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you've been on my mind for quite a while when i first meet you i d wouldnt think of you and i getting to know each other in such an intimate way, o how youve changed my life, and every thing i thought i knew has been thrown out the window i said you give me love , you give me love, love, love,beautiful love. like ive never known before your not just another fleeding infatuation to me, your way much more you send me , i say you send me, i am longing to marry you and take you home. you are more...
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Poetry / Forever
its beautiful, though you need to tweek it a little 8 line in second verse instead of mouse chase it should be since this is more familiar rat race
this some real pete seeger type stuff fight against the machine finger to the hypocritical law makers we got people dying constantly while the other is lost in futile ignorance and calls it bliss something just got to give the bottom of the bucket has to drop right now am just feeling all these words thinking am not the only one out here who see this. this here is real we got the president who uses the young men to exact revenge upon his enemys. where have the young men gone theyve gone! off ...
Poetry / Mad Men
wow, straight to the point genius. completely finding this interesting a pray you let me review some of your other works this could be come like one of those poems that go along with an introduction of a book such as elia weisels the night or primo levi's Se questo e un uomo e La tregua it it has the feel of their preface's beautiful and with much soul
Poetry / Your Career...
been choking on that yellow buddah smoke no doubt but shouldnt i know been with this outfit since day one been changing my ways, so half of the things you said i couldnt comprehend no longer lost in a haze, my minds expanding through pure torah truth i know your reading time magazine in with nothing but futile make dem youth an ignoramus propaganda and you can't get no satisfaction, other then that i am lost
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