BigMamaMags's profile
AGE:
49
LOC: Tupelo, MS
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 28
LOC: Tupelo, MS
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 28
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There is not enough room on this small space to write everything that I’d like to say, but I’ll try. I’m a previous nurse who has always had a love of reading and writing. I decided to change careers mid stream and try my hand at writing. I’m a widow with 2 children and 2 grandchildren. I write my children stories for them. I’ve had a recent addition to our family, a puppy named Bella Donna. She was born New Years Eve. I LOVE the color green and my favorite things to collect are frogs. I have many hobbies and activities I enjoy, but my favorite things to do is write and sketch. I’ve had a lot of life experiences for my 48 years on this earth, that I think will serve me well in my writing. I multi-task everything. I love …
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I don't know what the hell is wrong with me? I sit in my room and vegetate day after day. I don't want to go anywhere, see anyone or talk to anyone. Depression one might say. This is all too true, but there's more to it. I'm already on anti-anxiety meds as well as anti-depressants. Maybe a change in my meds? Maybe a change in scenery. Maybe I just need to make a change in my life status. Afterall, not living and feeling dead on the inside has come as easy to me as breathing. Maybe I need to ...
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Full life, Lived hard, No regrets.
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Birth, Turmoil, Changes, Rebirth, Challenges, Memories.
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Jake and Glen left the Goldstein property, after apologizing for having to leave her son's room in such disarray. Once in the car the two men just sat there for a moment in silence. Jake's booming voice shattered the stillness. "What the hell is going on in this town Glen? I know it was bad before Katrina, but shit is going from bad to worse now. "I know Jake. This killer is getting bolder and bolder every day. We have gotta get a handle on this thing before any more people are killed. I'm j...
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You came into my life, when I needed someone there. You made me feel my heart again, when I thought I would never care. You'll never know how much you touched me, my mind, my heart, my soul. For the first time in my life, you made me feel whole. You looked deep inside of me, and saw nothing but the best. Your tender way and words you speak, are nothing like the rest. You brought out the women in me, that no one else ever could. My world is so much brighter now, just like I knew it should. My ...
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I dare say that this was highly unique. It had a strange drawing in effect on me. The peculiarities of Part 1 were very interesting. I felt like it was incomplete in that it ended so suddenly with the introduction of Peter and his carvings. I guess I expected some confrontations other than what was mentioned. Don't get me wrong, it was a very well told story. The way your characters, the school as well as the various staff were described/explained was good. I just felt like there could/should...
While not the best horror on Urbis, it was very good. I liked the way this story started and how she reacted to what was done to her by the men. The idea she had become a vampire never occurred to me until she herself found out. I must say her acceptance of the whole thing was very matter of fact. It was all to common place to her like it happens every day. This surprised me. I think some adjustment time for the character as well as the reader was necessary. The character of Tara was well tho...
This was a great start to what may be a very captivating story. The story flowed well from the beginning to the end of the chapter. The characters are engaging and well thought out. Their individual personalities and details regarding personal events are realistic and believable. Nice build up of emotions and events to lead to further chapters. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors. I do think your use of consciousness two times in two sentences that follow each other could have been...
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I liked this continuation. It picked up seamlessly where the last one left off. It flowed well although it was a bit short. The characters are still being true to themselves and acting accordingly. Your characterizations of the police and store keeper are a bit cliche for a small town, but still enjoyable. Good job.
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