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AGE: 22
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 11

My name is Steven, i am 20 years old. I am a song writer, a poet, i play Bass, i love three things in life and thats my Love of my life Jess, My music, and my friends and family. Hope you all enjoy this and feel free to judge away im not an asshole lol i’ll take all the input i can.

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WAKE UP, (02:30 in the morning) INSOMNIA, (A Battle Reoccurring) Theres no way i can relax my nerves, With this pain, these drugs in my vains, Now i know that just for a minute, i can feel relief! Your Memories, i cannot escape I find it hard to erase these tapes, I swear you'll be the end of me, one day you'll look and see, THE DEMONS STARING BACK AT ME! -chorus- Silence, is all that i ask, Pills to escape the fuckin past, These ghosts haunt my thaughts, and as they speak they whisper, "we w...
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Poetry / The Lacuna Heart
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Lost in lovers lamentation, a lustful lack of longing, oh how i long for my love to lead me to the ledge where i first gazed upon her moon-lit face,the ledge where i stand in lorn,should i have listened to Lorelei, whose lot lured long boats to there demise,i would have surely lost my life, but to risk that lose, I am now a lone-wolf. I Long for the lover whose body lies beneath the trees, Thy lover who's life-like eyes luminate, as do Luna. The goddess of the moon, who so ever shall not lead...
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Lyrics / Morbid Silence
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No Ones The Same, Each person has been the one to blame, for the mistakes towards our down fall, but i laugh as i watch you beg and crawl, this aint a game it's our lives your messin with, why cant you put that in your head, each move you make us wind up dead, -Chorus- This is a morbid silence, stop the war with each stitch, all we asked was for peace and romance, but you called for more blood, you selfish bitch, this aint for the families you've destroyed, this aint for a new dictator, this ...
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My cold Lungs gasp for air, As i whisper bitter sweet nothings, My lovesick lullabye, who will save me from the cold? I will wait here, wait here in darkness, will your love, will your love give me air! -Chorus- Fall apart porcelain doll, fall to pieces as we fall, i cant rescue you from your grave, i'll remain here in this tomb im enslaved, I bled for each tear that you've cried, i'll sing for you your lullabye, You make me feel like Heaven's crashing around me, as death lies around us, your...
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Lyrics / Fading Souls
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RIGHT NOW! your taking my life away... Cause it doesn't matter anymore, you would try to talk shit everyday, But if i gave you that day, i still cant hear you here, Cause death is pulling me away...JUST TAKE IT AWAY!!! This life that you've made is to fuckin' hard, we cant see a clearing in these ruins, every word you say, every move you make, just ends up being the next ending story, why cant you see, this life is breaking me down!! -pre-chorus- Our life is thrown away, you made sure of that...
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Novel Treatments / The Void Sucker - Chapter 5
i think i said it earlier but i love te imagery, a good story to me has to have vivid imagery and it has to stick out to me lol. i love the usage of words that make the story seem to draw a picture for the reader. all in all good job and i look forward to reading more.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Family Secrets part 4 & 5
i must admit i love the conflict in this story as well as the imagery from the words. imagery to me is a major thing if i read something i need to be able to visualize it as if it were a movie as well. good language usage and didnt see many spelling mistakes either, keep it going.
Novel Treatments / The Void Sucker - Chapter 4
You know from me reading the intro i wasnt really sure if i was going to like this or not, it has a strong sense of imagery, in which i always love and adore. your words seem vivid and seem to all fit and fall into place. to me i think writing is more than just a hobby to you. but all in all i really enjoyed this.
i must admit i love the sensual words and theme to this. it kinda speaks out and takes you to a place where lust and love seem to collide. the words are very much allowing the reader to visualize what is happening and knowing me...i love visualization.
Short Story / Last Chance At life
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