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AGE:
19
LOC: Vancouver, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 13
LOC: Vancouver, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 13
I’m Crazy. Haha, no other way to put it. I’m fun-loving and I’ll do anything to make people smile. I love making new friends and I am very loyal to them. If they cry, I cry with them and I comfort them. I hate seeing dear ones in pain-who doesn’t? But I’m also a horrible enemy to have. If you mess with me or my friends, you WILL regret it. Yes, I can be a little creepy xD but I can also be just the opposite
I’m not the kind of person that likes to hold back. If something is bugging me, I’ll say so. I wont let it be there. I’m not shy at all-in fact I’m very outgoing. I never get embarrassed, as long as I’m having fun! I’m way out there, and I love to laugh. In fact there’s nothing I love more than to laugh and make others laugh. I f…
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I sometimes wonder why I did it. I can never know why it pained me so much to see the light leave his eyes, nor why I never really regretted it. At one time, I was an innocent, fearing the hunters, dreading the day they might take me. I was one of the few in my world to be born with unique abilities. But changing my form is not a gift like most would insist. Spilling blood is never a gift, nor is being tormented each night by the souls of those who's lives I have taken. How is waking up each ...
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Hope sighed as she leaned against the balcony, her tiny wings curled around her, sheltering her small body from the winds around her. Her curly onyx hair flowed around her in the strong breeze, tickling her face. She gazed dully across the feilds and houses, the light in her soft eyes dim and gloomy. Why did he have to leave again? Soft footsteps approached from behind her, but she continued to stare dejectedly out at the land below, pretending not to hear them. A large, kind hand placed itse...
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They may feature in our myths, our legends, our dreams, But they have their own destinies, their own loves, and their own dreams to fulfill. -Arania Kaolla Life is forever a test of faith, love is a curse we must all survive, and Death is a gift we all await. -Sabre Varg Forbidden Fruit always tastes sweeter -Alexandria Canedran Chapter 1 "Do you have anything to say before the verdict is announced?" the grand judge asked. Sabre spat out the toothpick on which he had been patiently gnawing, "...
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Sometimes I wonder what to do Sometimes I wonder what to say But when you’re around you make me doubt Doubt what I am, doubt what I want, even doubt who I should be Please help me now Around you my thoughts turn to confusion The truths lead me astray Separate the fact from legend And help me find out what to say Never know reality Can’t find you in this chaos So please…please help me now You make me doubt my own knowledge What is real, what is not? Now I see for the first time You have gone, ...
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Lost in my deep thoughts I create a fantasy I control the tide
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I don't understand this particular one. If you meant to create a traditional haiku...most traditional haiku involve an nature and nature alone, including a cutting word as well as a word implying a particular season or weather. Also, the traditional haiku doesn't contain rhyme, simile, metaphor, or personification. I can see your cutting word would be, "sears". However, I can not identify any other element in this poem that fits. If you meant to create an international haiku...I still do not ...
This is an interesting piece, fairly metaphorical and yet at the same time something I can picture in my mind. It's very well written. It's a song, yes? I'd be interested in hearing the tune, it doesn't seem to play out much like lyrics. Maybe tighten things up a bit.
I think that this piece was very well done. It struck me as creative and dark, with a few interesting twists. Just try to remember your grammar when you're typing. For example, when you use quotations, you rarely end them with a period. So instead of: “No, Jeff. You don’t need help, baby.” With a reassuring smile and his fingers tracing my lips, he shakes his head. “You just need me.” Try this: “No, Jeff. You don’t need help,” With a reassuring smile and his fingers tracing my lips, he shakes...
Needs more description. I wouldn't say it was ready for publication quite yet, but I can tell you that it is worth developing and building your skill. Change up your style a bit to make it less blunt and more mysterious. The ideas are excellent and intriguing. Overall, a good job, but not an amazing job.
The style of writing is excellent, and really interests me. You have just the right about of description and intrigue. Very well introduced and excellent follow up. A few things to change: "Nana always used to tell me they were like people, and sang their prettiest songs whenever they were saddest, when they knew that winter was coming." -Run on sentence, seems a bit...incomplete? " It was the middle of October, so I guess they didn’t have much time left. " -This sentence would be a turnoff t...
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