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AGE:
22
LOC: West Plains, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 02
LOC: West Plains, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 02
hey you guys…if you would like to learn more about me check out my myspace profile at www.myspace.com/mcbabyblonde.
I have been gone for a while… sorry to everyone. i don’t think anyone missed me, but hey. i’m glad to be back.
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There once was a man from Nantucket, Who had all he owned in a bucket. He took off his shoe, His socks were blue And they made a lovely puppet!
Version 3
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Split ends! I hate split ends. I glared at my hair sure it was the enemy, holding the tips in-between my fingers and twirling it around and around. Once I had it twisted around my index finger like a noose around the neck of a murderer, I unwound my digit and started pouting. Maybe that was all that was wrong. Maybe I was just having bad hair day and needed a makeover. It sounded like a good explanation but my head wouldn’t believe it. A new dye job wasn’t the answer and I knew without a dou...
Version 1
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Chapter One The year was 1952, in the month of April at the peak of the tornado season. The wind was howling and a shrill sound came through the cracks in walls and windows. A burst of light could be seen in the distance, followed a few seconds later by a roar of thunder. Rain spattered against the windowpane dripping down the side of the house leaving puddles that soaked into the already drenched ground. Storms like this would scare most people out of their wits if they had any about them, ...
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6 Reviews
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I laid there crying, my tears staining the lace. You stood there lying, lying straight to my face. You walked away without a feeling, I collapsed, my heart reeling. You took a hammer to my heart, You took me for a ride from the very start. I listened to every word you said, Replaying them in my mind as I lay down almost dead. Haunted by the words I held so dear, Wanting, hoping, wishing you were still here. Still no emotion could be seen, I never knew you could be so mean. Cruel is what you a...
Version 2
3 Reviews
2 Comments
Split ends! I hate split ends. I glared angrily at my hair, holding the tips in-between my fingers and twirling it around and around. Once I had it twisted painfully around my index finger, I unwound my digit and started pouting. Maybe that was all that was wrong. Maybe I was just having bad hair day and needed a makeover. It sounded like a good explanation but my head wouldn’t believe it. A new dye job wasn’t the answer and I knew without a doubt that it went deeper than that. If it were on...
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I really liked this piece. I am constantly looking for advice on my writing because it is something I really want to do with my life. My biggest fear is wondering if I'm over-thinking things or describing things more than they need. Your list of what an editor doesn't want to see was very helpful and I am going to use it when I write. I now realize that I have a lot of work to do and that my stories are not even close to being what they could be. Usually I just write out of boredom or when I ...
That was too funny, it reminded me of my sister and the way she talks. Sometimes I talk that way too when I am excited. I thoroughly enjoyed it. However it was slightly confusing at the beginning, but once you kept reading, it made more sense. Keep up with your writing.
That was great! I can never figure out how poems are supposed to be written and you nailed it right on the head. It made me laugh. I give you five stars, if we even do that here.
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