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AGE: 28
LOC: Ireland
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 05

Bosco is a longstanding member of the Most-Most club and remains slightly nervous of people who refer to themselves in the third person.

Bosco lives and works abroad.

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We are all lost, drugged Gods, bellowing and creating like enraged bulls, like all animals thwarted. You formulate and compile, goods in, carriage out, services rendered, to stay in the black with a dead God. There is no more heresy. Just desire and imagination swirling in the void. For when God, in the form of a snake, offered Eve the ripe apple, It was the devil who jumped from the bushes to cry shame.
Version 2
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They nailed him to a frame, and stretched his parchment skin, as they painted on his pain. The man who died for art, now hangs in marble halls, content, serene, established.
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Version 4
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The dry breeze that wends from the sandstone pages, Ink the flavour of figs and honeyed almonds, Vast dunes of prophesy and instruction. I have begun to doubt the existence of Richard Dawkins, In this warm eternal desert myth. Blood, Sword, Horse, Paradise. Far from the florescent light of reason, A flame dances in darkness, Coffee is brewed on a skillet, Far-fetched stories are exchanged, A warm fist of men about a fire, Backs turned to the void. Islam, Islam, Islam, Il hamdu lilah. Il hamdu...
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Version 1
21 Reviews   18 Comments
Somewhere deep in the bowels Of the here and now, Begins a savage stirring: "James Joyce is dead, And we are alive." Learnéd scholars, pouring over The carrion of text, Glibly reply: "Then death is more like life, And life is dull and deathly pale." They hold a conference titled "Ulysses and Globalisation" or, "Dubliners and The Celtic Tiger." But the rumbles do not cease Instead they become seismic tremors. Professors smile nervously to each other As if to say: "Oh how my imagination plays t...
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Poetry / Fin
Hello, Overview: I enjoyed your poem, especially the novelty of its disjointed form. There is something both very naive and at the same time engaging about the style (single lines with internal rhyming structure that only loosely relate to each other). I understood it as a kind of armageddon poem. A moral message that when internal sanity is lost it is the end (fin) of our humanity. But this reading is open to criticism. I'd be interested to know what you intended. Specifics: L1 "afire" would...
Hello, I liked this but found it confusing. I took it to mean that a love of art was destroyed by a lust for money. I'm only 50% convinced that that is what you mean. To me an "art school love" would be a girl you met at art school. I don't know, a little muddled for me. I'd be happy to follow up in comments. Hope I haven't missed something glaring. Bosco
Haiku/Senryu / Winter morning
Locked
Pat, I'm a difficult man by all accounts and I'm going to be difficult about this. The metaphor I read as getting to the heart of things, a search for truth. Uncovering deception after deception to finally reveal the source. Maybe an inward journey to discover oneself or an outward journey to discover the nature of life or love or of another person etc. With this premise in mind your senryu encounters difficulties. 1)when you strip of wallpaper (if behind which as you maintain there is in fac...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / 3:54 am
Howya, I enjoyed this somewhat throw-away entry. I guess it is evocative of a kind of lifestyle that charges the occasional 4 in the morning soul-sick horrors as the price of the four in the afternoon pillow. Yeah Douglas Adams's 'Long Dark Tea-Time of the Soul' reminds us that it is indeed a really cool frood who knows where his towel is. The existential dilemma in which your speaker is suffering can easily be cured by some physical exercise, casual sex, or playing Ella FitzGerald loud and o...