BrandiLBallard's profile
AGE:
28
LOC: Colorado Springs, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 16
LOC: Colorado Springs, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 16
I’m kind of all over the place. I like to write fantasy, poetry, horror, erotica, and mainstream fiction. I’m still trying to find my voice. I am starting a Poetry class and a Creative Non-fiction class mid-January so I should have a lot more to post then.
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Pen in hand; page is blank.
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Can't think of anything to write.
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Why'd I buy that damn typewriter?
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I normally don't go for this kind of story but something about your writing style really drew me in. The language you've used, gives me a great sense of character without having to be in first person. On page 2, incorrect/correct seems overused and is distracting. Part of the time, I'm not quite sure what is happening (page 2,3,4) but the language makes me read on. I was a little worried on how your writing would work when you moved to a female pov, but it worked really well. Page 11 was fant...
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