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Poetry / Just Wondering
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Stale cigarettes A million smiles Time to think Yes, its time to think Is this all u ever wanted? Is this your dream I doubt it Because its burried beneath Your million screams Someone you love Yet still longing And its a long yard Till the end But you hang on In hopes of a better dream In hopes of the new him Wondering... Is he ever going to be the same Wondering... Will you ever be tame Wondering... Does it matter anyway? Just wondering...
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How can you write a pain like this How can you bear something so miserable How can I fight this fight any longer Only God understands the kind of love I have loved Being pulled out from underneath me before I ever found it It isn’t right or fair and it sure doesn’t feel good I can’t make sense of it Only the snow will fall on those falls that day The day I go back and make things right of nothing in sight It will be late then but it will still feel right Everything is wrong about the love I l...
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Poetry / He Saves
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You will never understand the amount of hate this world has for you Until you know what love is You will never know what kind of pain this world will play on you Until you feel the depth of your first kiss Why does the world hate love Why does the world violate What is true and good It has traded all things for a stain But He saved my life and I gave Him mine What was left of it anyway And now the world hates me For what I use to be For what isn’t real any longer Why can’t they see I’m not wh...
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Romance / Crying in the dark
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All of the pretty things in this world Will never add up to you I wish I could feel you now I am wondering where you have been Please show me how I am wrong Because I called you today and I’ve not heard from you I know you are better than they are… I know you won’t leave me here But sometimes it is so hard without you Just to remember you live It seems like a fairy tale My Knight in shining armor Who hasn’t shown his face since the day of rescue Is it selfish of me to ask you to come to me? W...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / I need ur love....
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So scared I need you now More than ever before I've worked so hard on us and I don't want to see you walk out the door I need you now I've given my all to those I love Until I feel like I have nothing left I need you to descend from above There is no greater feeling Than to have you by my side No greater love than to feel you inside me No greater love than the day you died No greater do I have Than this longing to feel you again
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Poetry / Snowflake
I do like your poem. If I were to change one thing, it would be this: ’No two snowflakes are ever the same.’ Aren’t mortals the same? I wouldn't duplicate same so closely together in the poem. Like I said though, it is a good poem, and I don't see anything else I would changed about it! Definately a "unique" snowflake!!! Good luck on your future writing! God Bless! "Brand new lovely"
Quotes / Once Is Enough
I love this quote! I agree! We are all capable of seeing many different things, however, being the human mortals we are we are blind in some ways to me partly because of the 2% the average human being thinks with, if we could completely see, we would be useing 100% of our brains... and also in a more theoretical way as well, however theory is harder to explain than physical things... so I will just leave it at that.
Poetry / Lemonade
I like the first verse, I even like the second verse, but I don't feel like the third compliments the other two. Maybe more description? Maybe more about what you would do with the lemon juice on the floor first? I felt like more should have been added between these two lines... "to your nice-big-fancy-house, have myself some champagne," I felt like something was missing betweeen the two. Let me know if you decide to re-write it, I would love to read the next version! Thank you for posting th...
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