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oh god... you make me giggle :)

I just wanna say I liked this a lot! Good twist! Good thinking. Maybe instead of saying has "more" than nine lives, just say "but this cat HAS nine lives" since it's only one death??? I dont know. Thanks for the good little read.

This brought a smile to my face because I have asked myself that same question before. I think it's a universal theme... the comprehension of time. I'm not too familiar with Haiku style, so I can not critique it but I just wanted to say I enjoyed it! Where does the time go.....?

First and foremost I must say I really enjoyed this treatment and would love to read more! You were able to absorb me into your realm of Sam and now I beckon for more. To answer your question... YES of course I'd read more. You have the talent. The intro was simple yet brilliant. Direct to the point with a clear and concise introduction of a character and a hint of his notions (making the reader want to read more about what the stalker is doing). The naming and the desk is a fossil part was c...

I like this story. It's light and uplifting, like a bowl of chicken noodle soap on a sick day. Thanks for the good little read. As for grammar and spelling, I see nothing wrong. A couple of clichés are there, but they do not "stick out like a swore thumb" (haha *wink). It's ok to use SOME clichés as long as they are mild and fit well with the paragraph or sentence, which I feel you did. Good job.