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LOC: Wilmington, DE
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LAST LOGIN: December 08
LOC: Wilmington, DE
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 08
During high school summers I farmed. I did retail and temp service while learning photography. I moved household goods but got tired of the games that took most of my paycheck. I changed to construction labor, then insulation mech., two way radio repair, security, and loads of other jobs until I remembered how much I like driving. I went back into trucking working with compressed gasses, then carpet. Now I only drive. I also read and hobby write.
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Author's Note Many times over the past year, both in and out of school, people have asked me just what happened when John, Randy, Shelly, and I blew up the Western Hemisphere Headquarters of the Alnoutes. Shelly suggested that I should write a book about what happened. Here is the story as I lived it. There are many heroes who fought the caterpillars, including some who acted as if they were part of the problem but were really our agents. I congratulate all of our heroes, those I've met and t...
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Darryl Whitherspoon Thursday mornin' while fortifyin' my eyelids with coffee I booted my computer, opened the news, and read the banner headline: Near Earth Asteroid Will Strike. It grabbed my attention and I stopped to read the article, even though newsviewers usually sensationalize almost everythin' beyond recognition. I wanted to see just how accurately this story portrayed the science. The article talked about one of the "periodic asteroids close to Earth's orbit," also called Near Earth ...
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John Buchley Old brick high rise apartment buildings towered over the littered street, some with broken windows covered with plywood or cardboard. Next to an abandoned grocery, signs still hanging in the broken windows, a liquor store displayed its wares through steel grating. Abandoned cars, several missing glass and tires, stood along the curb. About twelve kids ran near the stream of water propelled from a hydrant, several boys playing chicken with the eighty pound per square inch stream, ...
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Author's Note Many times over the past year, both in and out of school, people have asked me just what happened when John, Randy, Shelly, and I blew up the Western Hemisphere Headquarters of the Alnoutes. Shelly suggested that I should write a book about what happened. Here is the story as I lived it. There are many heroes who fought the caterpillars, including some who acted as if they were part of the problem but were really our agents. I congratulate all of our heroes, those I've met and t...
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I had Exhol Elstak file an appeal stating that he did not have the proper knowledge to adequately defend me, that the expert witnesses weren't expert, that the evidence was gathered without proper permission, and that they had no real evidence of my crime. Then I sat in my cell for several days waiting for an answer. Of course the appeal didn't work, since the Captain was both the judge and the person ruling on my questions. He had already gone over the evidence with Tony D'stafano. Tony had ...
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Yeah, you were thirteen. Rather than leave this here, back it up, then rework it. You'll do much better. And backup your new project, at least once a month. Watch for redundancies. It's better to have another character describe a person, what he sees, or if there's no one else, use a mirror or a reflection in water. "many times went like this. He went to the " Try something like: He'd told the lie for years that he blah blah blah. This needs a complete rework. I'm not going to point out every...
Sins of the Father. Sounds like a pedophile priest or an incest sex story, especially with what's been in the news lately. Second paragraph: "who knows whom else" I find that whom stops me. Is that the right usage? Is it an object? It may be correct, but it's not necessary and can distract from the flow. "rebels desecrate the mission he’d dedicated almost all of his adult life to." I stopped. Ending a sentence with a preposition stops me. Too much editing of my stuff. " The vaporous haze of h...
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