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Throughout literature, there have been villains and antagonists, but none quite so dubious or well known as Iago from Shakespeare’s Othello, The Moor of Venice. Through his writing, Shakespeare paints a vivid image of a villain so vile that the phrase immoral does not do justice. A better choice of words would be amoral, completely lacking any morals whatsoever. In fact, one could even go so far as to say Iago is a sociopath. Dictionary.com defines a sociopath as “a person, as a psychopathic ...
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New York City, June 6, 2006 It was hard to believe that his travels had brought him to this city, thousands of miles from the land he still called home. A land that had forsaken him nearly a century ago. New York City was so different from his homeland. Everything was so big, so busy. Sometimes he wasn’t sure if he was coming or going. Malachi had arrived in New York just a week earlier. Normally, he avoided such large cities, but there was someone here that he would have to meet. There was s...
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New York City, June 6, 2006 It was hard to believe that his travels had brought him to this city, thousands of miles from the land he still called home. A land that had forsaken him nearly a century ago. New York City was so different from his homeland. Everything was so big, so busy. Sometimes he wasn’t sure if he was coming or going. Malachi had arrived in New York just a week earlier. Normally, he avoided such large cities, but there was someone here that he would have to meet. There was s...
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I crested the ridge, and saw my objective in the distance. The ship was enormous, truly a marvel of engineering. I turned to signal my squad and we began our steady advancement towards the worldship. We were barely half a kriptack away when I saw it coming. The automated defense systems had detected our presence. Squad Darfor had failed. As the barrage of plasma missiles launched and flew towards us, I couldn't help but think back over my life and the events that had led us all to this fooli...
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Italy, 1904 Brother Malachi, as he was known in this group, walked slowly down the dark steps of the catacombs, deep beneath the city. He carried a single torch, the only light in this dark place. Periodically, he turned and looked behind him, making sure he was not being followed. He was greeted only by the soft dripping of water from somewhere above him. Deeper he walked until he reached the bottom of the stone stairway, entering into the wide open chamber. His compatriots were already ther...
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I don't intend to be rude or cruel, but I just couldn't really get into this poem. It seems to simply come across as classic "emo" writing, more 'feel sorry for me' and less trying to make any kind of impact or statement. I'm sorry, I just didn't find this poem all that interesting :-/
This was an interesting read. I liked the fact that you were describing existance of a non-living thing evolving into a self-aware organism. It strays from the mainstream of sci-fi, so I don't know how well it would do as far as publishing. I, however, have a different taste from most and would be interested in reading more of this story. I saw a few grammatical errors, so you may want to have someone look it over and do some editting. Overall, though, I found it an interesting read and would...
Another good read. I'm really enjoying this series. I really hope you get published so I can get a bound copy of your story. Your characters are interesting and seem real. They're not flat like the characters of many new authors. All in all, I think you're doing a great job and have a great shot at being published some day. Keep up the good work and let me know how things go. And if you get a chance, check out some of my writings as well. I'm always looking for reviews of my own work, you kno...
This was an enjoyable piece, and I will have to read the beginning of the story. Overall it flowed well and I got a good sense of who the characters were. I'm a little in the dark about what is going on, but that is no fault of yours since Urbis often fails to place pieces in their proper order. Overall, this is a story I'm interested in reading and I thank you for posting it here. There were a few minor grammatical errors, but nothing too terrible.
Definitely not a bad story. I enjoyed the reading, though there were several grammatical and spelling errors. Still, you do a great job of portraying the main character and her life on her ship. I'd look forward to reading more of this story in the future. Look for a good editor to take care of those spelling and grammar errors and this would easily jump to an 8 in my opinion.
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