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AGE:
26
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 10
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 10
Burning Lashes is a twenty five year old writer. Based in the English home counties I draw influence from both the industrial progress of modern life and the local countryside. I have an undeniable dislike of confined city space and long to roam free in the air. The disintegration of human values, moral ineptitude and solitary enlightenment lead me to write the words that fall from my hand, to the pen, to the paper.
A great deal of my work is poetry based, as shown here on Urbis but as I painter and photographer I build up a greater picture to accompany my written works.
Please feel free to ask any questions concerning my work and know you are more then welcome to join my on my Myspace site http://www.myspace.com/funky_music_art …
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shall i hold you little girl in the palm of my own tethered hand so painfully bound you and I walking paths barefoot on broken glass would you be a burden suckling on my flesh to feed yourself Must i relent to your needs or insight abandon: allied then to predecessors Should I raise you above myself high among the clouds and stars feather light with frail sorrow heavy with your displaced secrets If I were to bath your wounds tender flesh and broken heart would it appease the demons you use to...
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An interesting interpretation of what a clown means. Normally a figure of fun you have chosen to show him as a figure of contempt, mocking perhaps. I agree frankly, with both the clown and the mocking of truth. SO often it is seen as something unimportant, something that means little. For me you have captured that meaning and full of spite put it into words. The length of this poem is interesting, rather than rant on and on about the subject by surmising the disgust in this few lines you have...
I like the idea of this poem but I find some of the language doesn't quite add up to that of a college student. For some reason calling a group of potential lawyers a "brainy bunch" doesn't seem vert real, instead it come ascross that you were grouping for a word to fit that denoted intelligence. what I did enjoy was your hearty attempt to cover all aspects of college life, the art sutidents, lawyers, musicians. It give the piece a well rounded form. I would consider some of the language as I...
This has a really nice rhythm with a slightly off kilter rhyme that works well. There are interesting themes at play here and for me a lot of contradiction. Questions of love and hate, growth and death. Nice job
A very concise piece but well written with great imagery I liked it a lot. The use of speech is clever and works well in comparison to the bridge which leads to there being no speech.
This is really rather good, its meaningful and honest and sits well with me. I particularly like the last line and I am more than happy that this reads with ease. There appears to be no force used to fit the words to the strict style.
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